Dec. 4, 2020
My songs, my life.
When I´m singing , my mind is in a new and happy world.
Music is for me a new life.
Several songs have important remembers .Each song had a part of my life. A song is a remember of people in a particular moment and my mind fly very fast . The years pass in seconds and the neurons dance free.
The day changes in a moment, my face has the eyes young and a big smile.
These songs are the paradise, my paradise , where I rest .
What a pity that this time is short.
Then come the reality.
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When I´I'm singing , my mind is in a newdifferent and happy world.
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Music is for me a gives me new life.
Several songs have important remembers .Each song I have strong memories with several songs, and each one hads a part of my life.
We don't really use "important" in that way.
A song is a rememberory of people in a particular moment and my mind fly very fast ies through them all quickly.
I wasn't really sure what you wanted to say in the last part, so I guessed.
The yYears pass in seconds , and the neurons dance freearound.
I think that this is more what you were trying to say.
The day changes in a moment, my face has the eyes young andview restored and my face with a big smile.
I wasn't really sure what the "eyes young" meant so I guessed.
These songs are the paradise, my paradise , where I rest .
What a pity that this time is short.
Then come thes reality.
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My songs, my life.
When I´I'm singing , , my mind is in a new and happy world.
Music is, for me , a new life.
Several songs have important remembers .memories. Each song hadolds a part of my life.
A song is a rememberory of people in a particular moment, and my mind fly ies very fast .quickly.
The yYears pass in seconds , and the neurons dance freely.
The day changes in a moment, and my face has the eyes young eyes and a big smile.
These songs are the paradise, my paradise , where I rest .
What a pity that this time is short.
Then come thes reality.
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My songs, my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My In English, the first letter of all verbs, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, nouns, etc., are capitalized. |
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When I´m singing , my mind is in a new and happy world. When When "New" technically isn't wrong but I wasn't sure what you meant by it, so I put different there instead in case that's what you meant to say. |
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Music is for me a new life. Music is, for me Music |
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Several songs have important remembers .Each song had a part of my life. Several songs
We don't really use "important" in that way. |
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A song is a remember of people in a particular moment and my mind fly very fast . A song A song I wasn't really sure what you wanted to say in the last part, so I guessed. |
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The years pass in seconds and the neurons dance free.
I think that this is more what you were trying to say. |
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The day changes in a moment, my face has the eyes young and a big smile. The day The day I wasn't really sure what the "eyes young" meant so I guessed. |
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These songs are the paradise, my paradise , where I rest . These songs are the paradise, These songs are |
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Then come the reality. Then come Then come |
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