My sSongs, mMy lLife. My Songs, My Life

In English, the first letter of all verbs, adjetives, adverbs, pronouns, nouns, etc., are capitalized.

When I´I'm singing , , my mind is in a new and happy world. When I'm singing, my mind is in a new and happy world.

When I´I'm singing , my mind is in a newdifferent and happy world. When I'm singing , my mind is in a different and happy world.

"New" technically isn't wrong but I wasn't sure what you meant by it, so I put different there instead in case that's what you meant to say.

Music is, for me , a new life. Music is, for me, a new life.

Music is for me a gives me new life. Music gives me new life.

Several songs have important remembers .memories. Each song hadolds a part of my life. Several songs have important memories. Each song holds a part of my life.

Several songs have important remembers .Each song I have strong memories with several songs, and each one hads a part of my life. I have strong memories with several songs, and each one has a part of me.

We don't really use "important" in that way.

A song is a rememberory of people in a particular moment, and my mind fly ies very fast .quickly. A song is a memory of people in a particular moment, and my mind flies very quickly.

A song is a rememberory of people in a particular moment and my mind fly very fast ies through them all quickly. A song is a memory of people in a particular moment and my mind flies through them all quickly.

I wasn't really sure what you wanted to say in the last part, so I guessed.

The yYears pass in seconds , and the neurons dance freely. Years pass in seconds, and neurons dance freely.

The yYears pass in seconds , and the neurons dance freearound. Years pass in seconds, and neurons dance around.

I think that this is more what you were trying to say.

The day changes in a moment, and my face has the eyes young eyes and a big smile. The day changes in a moment, and my face has young eyes and a big smile.

The day changes in a moment, my face has the eyes young andview restored and my face with a big smile. The day changes in a moment, my view restored and my face with a big smile.

I wasn't really sure what the "eyes young" meant so I guessed.

These songs are the paradise, my paradise , where I rest . These songs are the paradise, my paradise, where I rest.

These songs are the paradise, my paradise , where I rest . These songs are paradise, my paradise, where I rest .

Then come thes reality. Then comes reality.

Then come thes reality. Then comes reality.