June 6, 2023
MY ROUTINES
I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have bread for breakfast. I get work at 8: 20 A.M. I have lunch with co-workers at 12:00 o'clock. I come back to work 1: 00 P.M. I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M. In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house. Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays. I have a English class on monday, wednesday and friday. After go to bed I read a book and learn English. I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.
MY ROUTINES
I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth.
I have bread for breakfast.
I geto to work at 8: 20 A.M.
I have lunch with my co-workers at 12:00 o'clock.
I come back to work at 1: 00 P.M.
I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M.
In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house.
Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays.
I have a English class on mMonday, wWednesday and fFriday.
AfterBefore I go to bed, I read a book and learn English.
I think that you meant before you go to bed, since you can't read a book and learn English while you are sleeping.
I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.
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June 6, 2023
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MY ROUTINES
I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth.
I have bread for breakfast.
I get work at 8: 20 A.M.
I have lunch with co-workers at 12:00 o'clock.
I come back to work 1: 00 P.M.
I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M.
In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house.
Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays.
I have an English class on mMonday, wWednesday and fFriday.
1. Days of the week need to be capitalized 2. The indefinite article a changes to an when it is in front of a vowel
After I go to bed I read a book and learn English.
Depends what you are trying to say, this sentence can either be 1. After, I go to bed, read a book, and learn English. or 2. After I go to bed, I read a book and learn English.
I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M.
June 6, 2023
Overall very good grammar and sentence structure, but it can be better with less short sentences and more combined longer sentences.
June 6, 2023
Overall very good grammar and sentence structure, but it can be better with less short sentences and more combined longer sentences.
Thanks for responding
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I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my tooth. |
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I have bread for breakfast. |
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I get work at 8: 20 A.M. I g |
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I have lunch with co-workers at 12:00 o'clock. I have lunch with my co-workers at 12:00 o'clock. |
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I come back to work 1: 00 P.M. I come back to work at 1: 00 P.M. |
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I finish work at 5:30 P.M and get home at 6:00 P.M. |
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In the evening, I go jogging in the park near my house. |
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Sometimes, I play soccer with my friends on weekdays. |
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I have a English class on monday, wednesday and friday. I have an English class on 1. Days of the week need to be capitalized 2. The indefinite article a changes to an when it is in front of a vowel
I have a English class on |
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After go to bed I read a book and learn English. After I go to bed I read a book and learn English. Depends what you are trying to say, this sentence can either be 1. After, I go to bed, read a book, and learn English. or 2. After I go to bed, I read a book and learn English.
I think that you meant before you go to bed, since you can't read a book and learn English while you are sleeping.
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I go to bed at 11: 30 P.M. |
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I usually wake up at 5:30 A.M and get up 6:00 A.M. After that, I wash my face and brush my teeth. |
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