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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 5, 2021

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My Room

There is a study room in my home, and my first son and I usually use there.

I want to describe this room, especially near my desk.

On the right side of my desk, there are two monitors and an iPad.

There is a five-tier book shelf next to the desk and many books, including my English books, are there

On the left side of my desk, there is my first son's desk, which is sky blue and has a cute shape.

Next to that, there are two furnitures to display a lot of Lego figures and toys.

My favorite piece of furniture is the cabinet on the wall and it has my treasures like books, cameras, and fountain pens.

When I see in the furniture, I am able to remind my old memories.

Corrections

There is a study room in my home, and my first son and I usually use there.

There is a study room in my home, and my first son and I usually use it.

I want to describe this room, especially near my desk.

I want to describe this room, especially the desk near me.

When I see in the furniture, I am able to remind my old memories.

When I look at the furniture, I am reminded of my old memories.

Feedback

It's great. I would guess some of your sentences sounds off because you're translating directly from your native language. At the same time, however, I noticed you've used a very interesting phrases that can only be written by someone who's reading a lot. So, keep it up!

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 5, 2021

402

Terima kashi. (I only know this sentence)

There is a study room in my home, and my first son and I usually use there.

There is a study room in my home, and my first son and I usually use there.

My Room

I want to describe this room, especially near my desk.

I want to describe this room, especially near my desk.

On the right side of my desk, there are two monitors and an iPad.

There is a five-tier book shelf next to the desk and many books, including my English books, are there

On the left side of my desk, there is my first son's desk, which is sky blue and has a cute shape.

Next to that, there are two furnitures to display a lot of Lego figures and toys.

My favorite piece of furniture is the cabinet on the wall and it has my treasures like books, cameras, and fountain pens.

When I see in the furniture, I am able to remind my old memories.

When I see in the furniture, I am able to remind my old memories.

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