Oct. 10, 2021
My new noisy neighbor
My neighbor broke up with his wife. Now he's single, and suddenly becomes a horrible person. Right now he's playing music at 2 pm at the highest volume in his speakers, which turned out to be very powerful. I can understand that he's feeling sad after the breakup, but he's overacting and bothering the whole street.
My new noisy neighbor
My neighbor broke up with his wife.
Now he's single, and suddenly he has becomes a horrible person.
Or "suddenly he becomes a horrible person." The original didn't sound natural to me.
Right now he's playing music at 2 pm at the highest volume ion his speakers, which have turned out to be very powerful.
Or: "which are turning out to be very powerful." The simple perfect or present perfect are more appropriate because you are describing a present state.
I can understand that he's feeling sad after the breakup, but he's overreacting and bothering the whole street.
If someone "overacts," she is acting a role in an exaggerated, overly theatrical way. You are thinking of "overreact."
Oct. 13, 2021
Thanks for your corrections! They'll help me a lot
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My new noisy neighbor |
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My neighbor broke up with his wife. |
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Now he's single, and suddenly becomes a horrible person. Now he's single, and suddenly he has become Or "suddenly he becomes a horrible person." The original didn't sound natural to me.
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Right now he's playing music at 2 pm at the highest volume in his speakers, which turned out to be very powerful. Right now he's playing music at 2 pm at the highest volume Or: "which are turning out to be very powerful." The simple perfect or present perfect are more appropriate because you are describing a present state.
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I can understand that he's feeling sad after the breakup, but he's overacting and bothering the whole street. I can understand that he's feeling sad after the breakup, but he's overreacting and bothering the whole street. If someone "overacts," she is acting a role in an exaggerated, overly theatrical way. You are thinking of "overreact."
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