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Aug. 8, 2021

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My Ideal Lifestyle

My Ideal Lifestyle is that I work outside on sunny days, and read books on rainy days. It comes from a Japanese phrase: "晴耕雨読." However, these days, I've been always at home because of online classes. I'd like to go to university and lab next semester.

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My Ideal Lifestyle

My Iideal Llifestyle is that Io work outside on sunny days, and read books on rainy days.

It comes from a Japanese phrase: "晴耕雨読."

However, these days, I've been always been at home because of online classes.

Adverb should come before the verb

I'd like to go to university and the lab next semester.

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ponta

Aug. 9, 2021

217

Thank you!

My Ideal Lifestyle

My Ideal Lifestyle is that I work outside on sunny days, and read books on rainy days.

My Iideal Llifestyle is that Io work outside on sunny days, and read books on rainy days.

It comes from a Japanese phrase: "晴耕雨読."

However, these days, I've been always at home because of online classes.

However, these days, I've been always been at home because of online classes.

I'd like to go to university and lab next semester.

I'd like to go to university and the lab next semester.

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