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SummerTeaWater

July 5, 2021

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My Hometown

My hometown is a small city nearby Andong, which is one of the most famous traditional city in Korea.

Except central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on.

I lived there until high school and many friends still live there.

I usually meet them when I visit my hometown.

I visit three times a year for my parents' birthdays and the anniversary of my grand father's death.

My hometown always makes me reminisce about my past.

Old elementary school, playground and small stream remind my good old days.

I really love my hometown.

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My Hometown

My hometown is a small city nearby Andong, which is one of the most famous traditional city in Korea.

Except for the central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on.

I lived there until high school and many friends still live there.

I usually meet them when I visit my hometown.

I visit three times a year for my parents' birthdays and the anniversary of my grand father's death.

My hometown always makes me reminisce about my past.

OMy old elementary school, playground and a small stream remind mye of the good old days.

"the good old days" is an idiomatic expression

I really love my hometown.

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Great entry. It sounds like you really enjoy visiting your hometown.

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SummerTeaWater

July 5, 2021

402

Thanks for corrections.

My Hometown

My hometown is a small city nearby Andong, which is one of the most famous traditional city in Korea.

Except central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on.

Except for the central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on.

I lived there until high school and many friends still live there.

I usually meet them when I visit my hometown.

I visit three times a year for my parents' birthdays and the anniversary of my grand father's death.

My hometown always makes me reminisce about my past.

Old elementary school, playground and small stream remind my good old days.

OMy old elementary school, playground and a small stream remind mye of the good old days.

I really love my hometown.

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