July 5, 2021
My Hometown
My hometown is a small city nearby Andong, which is one of the most famous traditional city in Korea.
Except central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on.
I lived there until high school and many friends still live there.
I usually meet them when I visit my hometown.
I visit three times a year for my parents' birthdays and the anniversary of my grand father's death.
My hometown always makes me reminisce about my past.
Old elementary school, playground and small stream remind my good old days.
I really love my hometown.
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My Hometown
My hometown is a small city nearby Andong, which is one of the most famous traditional city in Korea.
Except for the central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on. Except for the central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on.
I lived there until high school and many friends still live there.
I usually meet them when I visit my hometown.
I visit three times a year for my parents' birthdays and the anniversary of my grand father's death.
My hometown always makes me reminisce about my past.
OMy old elementary school, playground and a small stream remind mye of the good old days.
My old elementary school, playground and a small stream remind me of the good old days.
"the good old days" is an idiomatic expression
I really love my hometown.
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Great entry. It sounds like you really enjoy visiting your hometown.
July 5, 2021
Thanks for corrections.
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My hometown is a small city nearby Andong, which is one of the most famous traditional city in Korea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Except central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on. Except for the central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on. Except for the central part of the city, all other areas are surrounded by farm fields of rice, apples and so on. |
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I lived there until high school and many friends still live there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually meet them when I visit my hometown. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I visit three times a year for my parents' birthdays and the anniversary of my grand father's death. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My hometown always makes me reminisce about my past. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Old elementary school, playground and small stream remind my good old days.
"the good old days" is an idiomatic expression |
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I really love my hometown. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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