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My Glasses Has Broken

My pair of glasses broke yesterday. When I tried to wear it, its right temple suddenly snapped. It was the first pair of glasses I bought and I had used it for four years. The temple was made of resin, so the reason may be the deterioration of resin as time passed. Fortunately, I previously bought another pair of glasses for backup, and I'm using it now.
4 months, 4 weeks ago
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DianeE
4 months, 4 weeks ago
My Glasses Hasve Broken
My pair of glasses broke yesterday.
When I tried to wear it, itsthem, the stem at the right temple suddenly snapped.
Glasses are a plural object in English, although it’s one item!
It was the first pair of glasses I had bought and I had used it for four years.
The stemple wass were made of resin, so the reason may be the deterioration of this resin as time passed.
Temple is a human body part, and not part of an inanimate object
Fortunately, I previously bought another pair of glasses for backup, and I'm using ithem now.
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4 months, 4 weeks ago
My Glasses Hasve Broken
My pair of glasses broke yesterday.
When I tried to wearput it on it, itsthe right temple suddenly snapped.
It was the first pair of glasses I had ever bought and. I had used it for four years.
The temple was made of resin, so the reasonat may be thewhy it deterioration of resin as time passeded over time.
Fortunately, I previously boughthave another pair of glasses that I've previously bought for backup, and I'am using ithem now.
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  • 2 My pair of glasses broke yesterday.
  • When I tried to wear it, its right temple suddenly snapped.
  • When I tried to wear it, itsthem, the stem at the right temple suddenly snapped.

    Glasses are a plural object in English, although it’s one item!
    Grammar
  • When I tried to wearput it on it, itsthe right temple suddenly snapped.

    Grammar Stylistic
  • It was the first pair of glasses I bought and I had used it for four years.
  • It was the first pair of glasses I had bought and I had used it for four years.

    Usage
  • It was the first pair of glasses I had ever bought and. I had used it for four years.

    Stylistic
  • The temple was made of resin, so the reason may be the deterioration of resin as time passed.
  • The stemple wass were made of resin, so the reason may be the deterioration of this resin as time passed.

    Temple is a human body part, and not part of an inanimate object
    Usage
  • The temple was made of resin, so the reasonat may be thewhy it deterioration of resin as time passeded over time.

    Stylistic
  • Fortunately, I previously bought another pair of glasses for backup, and I'm using it now.
  • Fortunately, I previously bought another pair of glasses for backup, and I'm using ithem now.

    Grammar
  • Fortunately, I previously boughthave another pair of glasses that I've previously bought for backup, and I'am using ithem now.

    Stylistic
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