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brytcelf

June 14, 2022

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my firs pubblication

This is my first pubblication here and on any other website. I have a little of vocabulary in english. I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen videos or movies but I can't expresse myself very well. I don't have practice because I live in Spain and here we speak spanish.
I would like, someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few month, practice the language and know the culture, although for me, the british accent is more difficult that american accent. Perhaps this is because american accent is more usual, for example in movies or music.
Anyway, I'm grateful for any correction

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mMy first pubblication

This is my first pubblication here andor on any other website.

"Publication" isn't exactly wrong, but the word is typically used for something more official, like a newspaper story or a story in a magazine. For a simple personal comment on a website like this one or on social media, you would usually use "post", i.e. "This is my first post here."

I have a little of vocabulary in eEnglish.

Your sentence is grammatically correct, except for needing to capitalize English. However, a native speaker might be more likely to say "I know a little bit of English vocabulary."

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen to videos or movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I don't have opportunities to practice because I live in Spain and here we speak sSpanish.

In English, the names of languages are capitalized, just like the name of countries.

I would like, to someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few months, so I could practice the language and knowexperience the culture, although for me, the bBritish accent is more difficult that ao understand than the American accent.

Either "I would like to someday travel" or "I would like to travel someday" would be equally correct.

Perhaps this is because aI've heard the American accent is more usual, for exampleoften in movies or music.

Anyway, I'm grateful for any correction

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Despite some grammatical errors, everything you have written would be perfectly understandable to an English speaker.

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brytcelf

July 3, 2022

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This is my first pubblication here andor on any other website.

"Publication" isn't exactly wrong, but the word is typically used for something more official, like a newspaper story or a story in a magazine. For a simple personal comment on a website like this one or on social media, you would usually use "post", i.e. "This is my first post here."

thanks

This is my first pubblication

I have a little of vocabulary in englishsmall English vocabulary.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen to videos or movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I don't have practice because I live in Spain and here we speak sSpanish.

I would like, to someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and know the culture, although for me, the bBritish accent is more difficult that an the American accent.

Perhaps this is because athe American accent is more usualcommon, for example in movies or music.

Anyway, I'm grateful for any corrections.

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Buen trabajo!

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brytcelf

June 17, 2022

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Thank you. I will take into account your suggestions

my first pubblication

This is my first pubblication here and on any other website.

I have a little of vocabulary in english.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen videos or watch movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I would like, someday, to travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and knowlearn the culture, although for me, the british accent is more difficult thatn american accent.

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Nice text :)

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brytcelf

June 14, 2022

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I would like, someday, to travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and knowlearn the culture, although for me, the british accent is more difficult thatn american accent.

thank you : D

mMy first pubblication

First word is always capitalized (La primera palabra en una oración es siempre mayúscula.

This is my first pubblication here and on any other website.

I have a little of vocabulary in eEnglish.

The names of languages are capitalized. (Los nombres de idiomas son mayúsculas)

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen to videos or movies, but I can't expresse myself very well.

I docan't have practice because I live in Spain, and here we speak sSpanish here.

I would like, to someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and know the culture, a. Although for me, the bBritish accent is more difficult that an the American accent.

Perhaps this is because aAmerican accent is more usualprominent, for example in movies or music.

La palabra "Prominent" es más avanzada, pero funciona mejor en este contexto.

Anyway, I'm grateful for any correction.

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¡Buen hecho, continúe practicando!

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brytcelf

June 17, 2022

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Perhaps this is because aAmerican accent is more usualprominent, for example in movies or music.

La palabra "Prominent" es más avanzada, pero funciona mejor en este contexto.

Thank you so much. I thought I answered you before.

About this word: "prominent", Is it possible to use "...American accent is better known for movies or music"?

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borkbork124

June 17, 2022

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Almost, I missed a something in the original sentence. "Perhaps this is because THE American accent is better known WITHIN movies AND music. I hope this clears things up.

my firs pubblication

This is my first pubblication

my first pubblication

mMy first pubblication

mMy first pubblication

This is my first pubblication here and on any other website.

This is my first pubblication here and on any other website.

This is my first pubblication here and on any other website.

This is my first pubblication here andor on any other website.

I have a little of vocabulary in english.

I have a little of vocabulary in englishsmall English vocabulary.

I have a little of vocabulary in english.

I have a little of vocabulary in eEnglish.

I have a little of vocabulary in eEnglish.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen videos or movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen videos or watch movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen to videos or movies, but I can't expresse myself very well.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen to videos or movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I can to understand when I read simple texts or when I listen to videos or movies but I can't expresse myself very well.

I don't have practice because I live in Spain and here we speak spanish.

I docan't have practice because I live in Spain, and here we speak sSpanish here.

I don't have practice because I live in Spain and here we speak sSpanish.

I don't have opportunities to practice because I live in Spain and here we speak sSpanish.

I would like, someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few month, practice the language and know the culture, although for me, the british accent is more difficult that american accent.

I would like, someday, to travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and knowlearn the culture, although for me, the british accent is more difficult thatn american accent.

I would like, to someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and know the culture, a. Although for me, the bBritish accent is more difficult that an the American accent.

I would like, to someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few months, practice the language and know the culture, although for me, the bBritish accent is more difficult that an the American accent.

I would like, to someday, travel to the UK and live there for a few months, so I could practice the language and knowexperience the culture, although for me, the bBritish accent is more difficult that ao understand than the American accent.

Perhaps this is because american accent is more usual, for example in movies or music.

Perhaps this is because aAmerican accent is more usualprominent, for example in movies or music.

Perhaps this is because athe American accent is more usualcommon, for example in movies or music.

Perhaps this is because aI've heard the American accent is more usual, for exampleoften in movies or music.

Anyway, I'm grateful for any correction

Anyway, I'm grateful for any correction.

Anyway, I'm grateful for any corrections.

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