Dec 12

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My favourite animal

To be honest, just choosing one animal is unfair. For me at least, is a close "fight" between cats and dogs. What i love about the dogs is their loyalty, and that they are very close to the humans, if we compare it to the cats. But, don't get me wrong, some cats can be very close too, sometimes too close, even some can lay down in your head while you are sleeping (i'm talking from my own experience). What i love about the cats is their purring, it just help to relax, specially in hard days

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Faizyrooma4 2.97

For me at least, is a close "fight" between cats and dogs.

The quotation marks aren't really needed.

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What iI love about the dogs is their loyalty, and that they are very close to the humans, ~~if we~~when compare itd to the cats.

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But, don't get me wrong, some cats can be very close friends too, sometimes too close, even some can lay down in your head while you are sleeping (iI'm ~~tal~~speaking from my own experience).

Just saying "very close" sounds a bit off here, though not that unnatural.

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What i love about the cats is their purring, it just help to relax, especially ion hard days

"after hard days" might also work, since most people relax *after* a hard day ;)

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Overall feedback & comment

Overall, well written, and nice balanced view you gave too. ^^
You used some good expressions.

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My favourite animal

To be honest, just choosing one animal is unfair.

For me at least, it is a close "fight" between cats and dogs.

You don't need to put fight in quotation marks, it's fine without them!

What iI love about ~~the~~ dogs is their loyalty, and that they are very close to ~~the~~ humans~~, if we~~ compare ~~it to the~~d to cats.

But, don't get me wrong, some cats can be very ~~close~~friendly too, sometimes too ~~close, even~~friendly, some can even lay down ion your head while you are sleeping (i'm talking from my own experience).

I think "friendly" makes more sense than "close" in this sentence

What iI love about the cats is their purring, it just helps me to relax, especially ion hard days

Overall feedback & comment

Well written! Mostly just some small changes needed to be made. I also really love cats!

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To be honest, just choosing one animal is unfair.

For me at least, is a close "fight" between cats and dogs.

For me at least, it is a close "fight" between cats and dogs.

You don't need to put fight in quotation marks, it's fine without them!

For me at least, is a close "fight" between cats and dogs.

The quotation marks aren't really needed.

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What i love about the dogs is their loyalty, and that they are very close to the humans, if we compare it to the cats.

What iI love about ~~the~~ dogs is their loyalty, and that they are very close to ~~the~~ humans~~, if we~~ compare ~~it to the~~d to cats.

What iI love about the dogs is their loyalty, and that they are very close to the humans, ~~if we~~when compare itd to the cats.

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But, don't get me wrong, some cats can be very close too, sometimes too close, even some can lay down in your head while you are sleeping (i'm talking from my own experience).

I think "friendly" makes more sense than "close" in this sentence

But, don't get me wrong, some cats can be very close friends too, sometimes too close, even some can lay down in your head while you are sleeping (iI'm ~~tal~~speaking from my own experience).

Just saying "very close" sounds a bit off here, though not that unnatural.

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What i love about the cats is their purring, it just help to relax, specially in hard days

What iI love about the cats is their purring, it just helps me to relax, especially ion hard days

What i love about the cats is their purring, it just help to relax, especially ion hard days

"after hard days" might also work, since most people relax *after* a hard day ;)

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