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alenap

Feb. 7, 2022

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My day

I would like to tell you about my day. First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock. Then I like to check global and local news and my email. After I start exercising. I love sports very much because it allows me to be in shape. Then I take a shower and finally have breakfast, almost always porridge with fruit. I want to add that this is my favorite food! Then there is time for work or study until lunch. My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat Indian food - palak paneer. Then I sleep a bit and continue to work. In the evening I like walking along the beach and when I get home I have dinner. After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain me.

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My dDay

Each content word in a title should be capitalized.

I would like to tell you about my day.

First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock.

Then, I like to check global and local news, and my email.

I added in commas for better flow. :)

After that, I start exercising.

I love sports very much because it allows me to bethey help me stay in shape.

Then I take a shower, and finally I have breakfast, which is almost always porridge with fruit.

I want to add that this is my favorite food!

Then there is time for work or studying until lunch.

My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat an Indian food -called palak paneer most of all.

Then I sleep a bit and continue tokeep working.

In the evening, I like walking along the beach, and when I get home, I have dinner.

After dinner, I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain meing.

My day

I would like to tell you about my day.

First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock.

Then I like to check global and, local news, and my email.

After I startthat I exercisinge.

I love sports very much because it allows me to be in shape.

Then I take a shower and finally have breakfast, almost always porridge with fruit.

I want to add that this is my favorite food!

Then ithere is time for work or studying until lunch.

My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat Indian food - like palak paneer.

Then I sleep a bit and continue to work.

Could also use "take a nap" to sound more natural.

In the evening I like walking along the beach and when I get home I have dinner.

After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertains me.

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I made palak paneer the other night, actually. Great post!

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alenap

Feb. 7, 2022

2

Thank you so much!

My day

My dDay

I would like to tell you about my day.

First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock.

Then I like to check global and local news and my email.

Then I like to check global and, local news, and my email.

Then, I like to check global and local news, and my email.

After I start exercising.

After I startthat I exercisinge.

After that, I start exercising.

I love sports very much because it allows me to be in shape.

I love sports very much because it allows me to bethey help me stay in shape.

Then I take a shower and finally have breakfast, almost always porridge with fruit.

Then I take a shower, and finally I have breakfast, which is almost always porridge with fruit.

I want to add that this is my favorite food!

Then there is time for work or study until lunch.

Then ithere is time for work or studying until lunch.

Then there is time for work or studying until lunch.

My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat Indian food - palak paneer.

My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat Indian food - like palak paneer.

My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat an Indian food -called palak paneer most of all.

Then I sleep a bit and continue to work.

Then I sleep a bit and continue to work.

Then I sleep a bit and continue tokeep working.

In the evening I like walking along the beach and when I get home I have dinner.

In the evening, I like walking along the beach, and when I get home, I have dinner.

After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain me.

After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertains me.

After dinner, I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain meing.

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