Jan. 15, 2022
My childhood
Hmmm i thought about it last night. It was the best time in my life. I had no commitments and could enjoy it. Locking back I should have invest more time getting better at school. My grades were always bad. Especially in English. My Teacher, a very friendly and empathic person, recommended me: "You need to improve your english skills. If you want to become an executive in an international company, you need to be able to talk and write english fluently!"
My childhood
Hmmm i, I thought about it last night.
It was the best time in my life.
I had no commitments and could enjoy itmyself.
Locoking back I should have invested more time getting better at school.
My grades were always bad.
Especially in English.
You could make these two sentances into one: "My grades were always bad, especially in English."
My Teacher, a very friendly and empathic person, recommendetold me: "You need to improve your english skills.
You could say "recommended that I improve my English skills," but it's not used to introduce a direct quote.
If you want to become an executive in an international company, you need to be able to talk and write english fluently!"
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Thank you for sharing your experience!
My childhood
Hmmm i thought about it last night.
It was the best time inof my life.
Using 'of' instead of ' in' probably better here.
I had no commitments and could enjoy it.
Locoking back I should have invest more time getting better at school.
My grades were always bad.
Especially in English.
My Teacher, a very friendly and empathic person, recommended me: "You need to improve your english skills.
If you want to become an executive in an international company, you need to be able to talk and write english fluently!"
Feedback
Great job, keep up the good work!
Locoking back I should have invested more time into getting better at school.
My Tteacher, a very friendly and empathic person, recommended to me: "You need to improve your english skills.
If you want to become an executive in an international company, you need to be able to talk and write ein English fluently!"
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I'm impressed overall :)
Jan. 15, 2022
Thank you very much :)
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Hmmm i thought about it last night. Hmmm |
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It was the best time in my life. It was the best time Using 'of' instead of ' in' probably better here.
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I had no commitments and could enjoy it. I had no commitments and could enjoy |
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Locking back I should have invest more time getting better at school. Lo Lo Lo |
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My grades were always bad. |
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Especially in English. Especially in English. You could make these two sentances into one: "My grades were always bad, especially in English."
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My Teacher, a very friendly and empathic person, recommended me: "You need to improve your english skills. My My Teacher, a very friendly and empathic person, You could say "recommended that I improve my English skills," but it's not used to introduce a direct quote.
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If you want to become an executive in an international company, you need to be able to talk and write english fluently!" If you want to become an executive in an international company, you need to be able to talk and write |
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