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ponta

Sept. 4, 2021

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My Backpack

I have one favorite backpack that I've used for over five years. I like it because it is stout and has lots of storage. Additionally, the appearance is the coolest for me, so I always use it even though I bought a couple of other backpacks. Due to heavy use, the logo on the surface is partly missing and a zipper handle was almost shredded. Finally today, the zipper was broken and it's time to buy a new one. I'm a bit sad but satisfied that I've used it for such a long time.

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My Backpack

I have one favorite backpack that I've used for over five years.

I like it because it is stouturdy and has lots of storage.

Additionally, theits appearance is the coolest for me, so I always use it even though I bought a couple of other backpacks.

Due to heavy use, the logo on the surface is partly missing and a zipper handle was almost shredded.

Finally, today, the zipper was broken and it's time to buy a new one.

I'm a bit sad, but satisfied that I've used it for such a long time.

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ponta

Sept. 5, 2021

217

Thank you for the correction!

My Backpack

I have one favorite backpack that I've used for over five years.

I like it because it is stout and has lots of storage.

I like it because it is stouturdy and has lots of storage.

Additionally, the appearance is the coolest for me, so I always use it even though I bought a couple of other backpacks.

Additionally, theits appearance is the coolest for me, so I always use it even though I bought a couple of other backpacks.

Due to heavy use, the logo on the surface is partly missing and a zipper handle was almost shredded.

Finally today, the zipper was broken and it's time to buy a new one.

Finally, today, the zipper was broken and it's time to buy a new one.

I'm a bit sad but satisfied that I've used it for such a long time.

I'm a bit sad, but satisfied that I've used it for such a long time.

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