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More customers?

More customers?

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnished.

With new chairs and tables, they replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” order.

For Japanese may think that is common.

Because in Japan restaurant is usually purchase a ticket before.

But not Hong Kong!

In here most people especially old and lazy person.

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

Face a big screen and making decision is a hard job for them.

This morning when I come to fast food chain is less customers than before.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant is full of customers.

People hate change!

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More customers?

More customers?

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnbished. their restaurant

With new chairs and tables, they replaceinstalled 3 self-order machines instead “human” order.of waiters.

For Japanese may think that is common.normal.

Because in Japan restaurant it is usually to purchase a ticket before.

In hHere most people, especially the old and lazy person.like

They like to come to counter and toldorder what they want.

FaceLooking at a big screen and making decision is a hard jobdifficult for them.

This morning when I coame to the fast food chain isrestaurant there were less customers than before.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant irestaurant where waiters take orders was full of customers.

People hate change!

Feedback

Well done!

More customers?

More customers?

In my town, one of the fast food chain just refurnishrestaurants was just renovated.

WithThey added new chairs and tables, they and replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” orderd human cashiers with three self-order machines.

This means, there are now self-order machines, instead of humans taking food orders.

I wasn't sure if this was what you meant.

For Japanese people may think that is common.

Because in Japan restaurant is, you usually purchase a ticket before going to a restaurant.

I'm sorry, but I don't really know what you mean here by "purchase a ticket." Order the food online? Make a reservation?

But not in Hong Kong!

In hHere, most people are especially old and lazy person.

They like to come to the counter and toldell the cashier what they want.

Faceing a big screen and making decisions is a hard job for them.

This morning when I come towent to the fast food chain isrestaurant, it had less customers than before.

WhileBut next door, the “old style” restaurant where humans take order restaurants is full of customers.

People hate change!

In my town one of the fast food chains was just refurnished.

Tenses are tricky in English! Also, if you write 'fast food chains' this means all the stores belonging to that chain - you may mean 'one of the fast food restaurants'?

WithAs well as new chairs and tables, they replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” orderd the customer service representatives with three self-order machines.

For Japanese may think that is common.

The Japanese may think that this is common.

Because in Japan restaurant isyou usually purchase a ticket before going to a restaurant.

Word order

But not in Hong Kong!

In hHere most people, especially old and lazy person.ople, like to come to the counter and say what they want.

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

I would merge this with the previous sentence (which lacks a verb)

Faceing a big screen and making a decision is a hard jobtask for them.

This morning when I coame to the fast food chain is lessthere were fewer customers than before.

'Fewer' for count downs

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurantrestaurant with the “old style” ordering system is full of customers.

Feedback

Well done! English is really challenging, but even when you make little mistakes, your meaning is clear. Keep up the terrific effort!

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnishedrestaurants just renovated their store.

WithThey put in new chairs and tables, theyand to replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” ordercounter service, they installed 3 self-order kiosks.

ForThe Japanese may think that this is common.

Because in a Japanese restaurant is, you usually purchase a ticket before.

But not in Hong Kong!

In hHere most people are expect to come to the counter and order, especially old and lazy personople.

I combined two sentences

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

FIt's difficult for them to face a big screen and makinge a decision is a hard job for them.

This morning when I coame to this fast -food chain is lessrestaurant, there were fewer customers than beforeusual.

less + uncounted: less money, less time
fewer + counted: fewer dollars, fewer minutes, fewer customers

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant i, at the same time, the “old style” restaurant next door, where people take your order, was full of customers.

More customers?

More customers?

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnished.

In my town, one of the fast food chain just refurnishrestaurants was just renovated.

In my town one of the fast food chains was just refurnished.

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnbished. their restaurant

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnishedrestaurants just renovated their store.

With new chairs and tables, they replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” order.

WithThey added new chairs and tables, they and replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” orderd human cashiers with three self-order machines.

WithAs well as new chairs and tables, they replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” orderd the customer service representatives with three self-order machines.

With new chairs and tables, they replaceinstalled 3 self-order machines instead “human” order.of waiters.

WithThey put in new chairs and tables, theyand to replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” ordercounter service, they installed 3 self-order kiosks.

For Japanese may think that is common.

For Japanese people may think that is common.

For Japanese may think that is common.

For Japanese may think that is common.normal.

ForThe Japanese may think that this is common.

Because in Japan restaurant is usually purchase a ticket before.

Because in Japan restaurant is, you usually purchase a ticket before going to a restaurant.

Because in Japan restaurant isyou usually purchase a ticket before going to a restaurant.

Because in Japan restaurant it is usually to purchase a ticket before.

Because in a Japanese restaurant is, you usually purchase a ticket before.

But not Hong Kong!

But not in Hong Kong!

But not in Hong Kong!

But not in Hong Kong!

In here most people especially old and lazy person.

In hHere, most people are especially old and lazy person.

In hHere most people, especially old and lazy person.ople, like to come to the counter and say what they want.

In hHere most people, especially the old and lazy person.like

In hHere most people are expect to come to the counter and order, especially old and lazy personople.

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

They like to come to the counter and toldell the cashier what they want.

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

They like to come to counter and toldorder what they want.

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

Face a big screen and making decision is a hard job for them.

Faceing a big screen and making decisions is a hard job for them.

Faceing a big screen and making a decision is a hard jobtask for them.

FaceLooking at a big screen and making decision is a hard jobdifficult for them.

FIt's difficult for them to face a big screen and makinge a decision is a hard job for them.

This morning when I come to fast food chain is less customers than before.

This morning when I come towent to the fast food chain isrestaurant, it had less customers than before.

This morning when I coame to the fast food chain is lessthere were fewer customers than before.

This morning when I coame to the fast food chain isrestaurant there were less customers than before.

This morning when I coame to this fast -food chain is lessrestaurant, there were fewer customers than beforeusual.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant is full of customers.

WhileBut next door, the “old style” restaurant where humans take order restaurants is full of customers.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurantrestaurant with the “old style” ordering system is full of customers.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant irestaurant where waiters take orders was full of customers.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant i, at the same time, the “old style” restaurant next door, where people take your order, was full of customers.

People hate change!

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