In my town, one of the fast food chain just refurnishrestaurants was just renovated. In my town, one of the fast food chain restaurants was just renovated.

In my town one of the fast food chains was just refurnished. In my town one of the fast food chains was just refurnished.

Tenses are tricky in English! Also, if you write 'fast food chains' this means all the stores belonging to that chain - you may mean 'one of the fast food restaurants'?

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnbished. their restaurant In my town one of the fast food chain just refurbished their restaurant

In my town one of the fast food chain just refurnishedrestaurants just renovated their store. In my town one of the fast food chain restaurants just renovated their store.

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This means, there are now self-order machines, instead of humans taking food orders. I wasn't sure if this was what you meant.

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WithThey put in new chairs and tables, theyand to replace 3 self-order machines instead “human” ordercounter service, they installed 3 self-order kiosks. They put in new chairs and tables, and to replace counter service, they installed 3 self-order kiosks.

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The Japanese may think that this is common.

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ForThe Japanese may think that this is common. The Japanese may think that this is common.

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I'm sorry, but I don't really know what you mean here by "purchase a ticket." Order the food online? Make a reservation?

Because in Japan restaurant isyou usually purchase a ticket before going to a restaurant. Because in Japan you usually purchase a ticket before going to a restaurant.

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Because in Japan restaurant it is usually to purchase a ticket before. Because in Japan restaurant it is usual to purchase a ticket before.

Because in a Japanese restaurant is, you usually purchase a ticket before. Because in a Japanese restaurant, you usually purchase a ticket before.

But not in Hong Kong! But not in Hong Kong!

But not in Hong Kong! But not in Hong Kong!

But not in Hong Kong! But not in Hong Kong!

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In hHere most people are expect to come to the counter and order, especially old and lazy personople. Here most people are expect to come to the counter and order, especially old and lazy people.

I combined two sentences

They like to come to the counter and toldell the cashier what they want. They like to come to the counter and tell the cashier what they want.

They like to come to counter and told what they want. They like to come to counter and told what they want.

I would merge this with the previous sentence (which lacks a verb)

They like to come to counter and toldorder what they want. to come to counter and order what they want.

They like to come to counter and told what they want.

Faceing a big screen and making decisions is a hard job for them. Facing a big screen and making decisions is a hard job for them.

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This morning when I come towent to the fast food chain isrestaurant, it had less customers than before. This morning when I went to the fast food chain restaurant, it had less customers than before.

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This morning when I coame to the fast food chain isrestaurant there were less customers than before. This morning when I came to the fast food restaurant there were less customers than before.

This morning when I coame to this fast -food chain is lessrestaurant, there were fewer customers than beforeusual. This morning when I came to this fast-food restaurant, there were fewer customers than usual.

less + uncounted: less money, less time fewer + counted: fewer dollars, fewer minutes, fewer customers

WhileBut next door, the “old style” restaurant where humans take order restaurants is full of customers. But next door, the “old style” restaurant where humans take orders is full of customers.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurantrestaurant with the “old style” ordering system is full of customers. While next door the restaurant with the “old style” ordering system is full of customers.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant irestaurant where waiters take orders was full of customers. While next door the “old style” restaurant where waiters take orders was full of customers.

While next door the “old style” human take order restaurant i, at the same time, the “old style” restaurant next door, where people take your order, was full of customers. While, at the same time, the “old style” restaurant next door, where people take your order, was full of customers.