Dec. 4, 2022
Momotarou
Momotarou is one of the most common Japanese fairytale. The protagonist of this story is Momotarou who literally is born from peach (Momo). The story tells the importance of making friends and having the courage.
Once upon a time, an elderly couple who don't have their own child picked up big peach flowing through a river. They split it by kitchen knife and find the baby in it. The baby is named Momotarou after the peach and looked after by the couple. He becomes adult and make his mind to slay the demons that live in the island far from his hometown. On the way to the mission, a monkey, a dog, and a pheasant are joined the party by feeding the dumblings (Kibidango), which is actually a local sweets at Okayama prefecture. As a result of the battle, they conquer the demons and bring their treasures to his hometown.
I have no idea why they have to fight with the demons and rob them of their belongings because what demons do is unclear in the story.
Momotarou
Momotarou is one of the most common Japanese fairytales.
知っています！
The protagonist of this story is Momotarou who literally is born from a peach (Momo).
The story tells the importance of making friends and having the courage.
いい昔話ですね。
"Courage" is abstract and non countable so that's why we don't use an article with it.
Once upon a time, an elderly couple, who doidn't have their own child, picked up a big peach flowating through aon the river.
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He becoames an adult and makde up his mind to slay the demons thatwho live id on the island far from his hometown.
You started telling the story in past tense so we should keep it the same throughout the essay.
On the way to thehis mission, a monkey, a dog, and a pheasant are joined the party byecause Momotarou feeding them dumbplings (Kibidango), which isare actually a local sweets at made in Okayama prefecture.
As a result of the battle, they conquered the demons and bringought their treasures to his hometown.
I have no idea why they have to fight with the demons and rob them of their belongings because what the demons doid is unclear in the story.
面白そうです。
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Dec. 5, 2022
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Momotarou is one of the most common Japanese fairytale. Momotarou is one of the most common Japanese fairytales. 知っています！
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The protagonist of this story is Momotarou who literally is born from peach (Momo). The protagonist of this story is Momotarou who literally is born from a peach (Momo). |
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The story tells the importance of making friends and having the courage. The story tells the importance of making friends and having いい昔話ですね。
"Courage" is abstract and non countable so that's why we don't use an article with it. |
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Once upon a time, an elderly couple who don't have their own child picked up big peach flowing through a river. Once upon a time, an elderly couple, who d |
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They split it by kitchen knife and find the baby in it. They split it |
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The baby is named Momotarou after the peach and looked after by the couple. The |
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He becomes adult and make his mind to slay the demons that live in the island far from his hometown. He bec You started telling the story in past tense so we should keep it the same throughout the essay.
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On the way to the mission, a monkey, a dog, and a pheasant are joined the party by feeding the dumblings (Kibidango), which is actually a local sweets at Okayama prefecture. On the way to |
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As a result of the battle, they conquer the demons and bring their treasures to his hometown. As a result of the battle, they conquered the demons and br |
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I have no idea why they have to fight with the demons and rob them of their belongings because what demons do is unclear in the story. I have no idea why they have to fight with the demons and rob them of their belongings because what the demons d 面白そうです。
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