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SteppeBrother

Jun 02

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Military Service.

In Kazakhstan we have a compulsory military service. Any young man from the age of 18 to 27 is registered as a recruit in the local military office and has to complete a medical examination. After passing the examination the draft board must decide whether a recruit is able to perform a military service or not. In most of the cases they don’t care and can approve a recruit with a moderately bad eyesight or someone who doesn’t have a sufficient physical training. Many young men dislike the idea of getting to the army and try to avoid it at all costs. Luckily, there are some legal options for this. If a young man is studying at university he gets a postponement for several years. Some of the men might go for a bachelor degree and then for a master degree just for not dealing with the military service. The other option is to get a job in the government services such as the police or the national security. Recently there has been an option to take a paid 40 days military training program which is allowed to replace the compulsory military service. However, it costs a large sum of money that not everyone could get.
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In Kazakhstan we have a compulsory military service.

In Kazakhstan we have a compulsory military service.

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Any young man from the age of 18 to 27 is registered as a recruit in the local military office and has to complete a medical examination.

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After passing the examination the draft board must decide whether a recruit is able to perform a military service or not.

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In most of the cases they don’t care and can approve a recruit with a moderately bad eyesight or someone who doesn’t have a sufficient physical training.

In most of the cases, they don’t care and can approve a recruit with a moderately bad eyesight or someone who doesn’t have a sufficient physical training.

In most of the cases they don’t care, and can approve a recruit with a moderately bad eyesight or someone who doesn’t have a sufficient physical training.

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Luckily, there are some legal options for this.

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If a young man is studying at university he gets a postponement for several years.

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The other option is to get a job in the government services such as the police or the national security.

The other option is to get a job in the government services such as the police or the national security.

The other option is to get a job in the government services such as in the police or the national security.

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Recently there has been an option to take a paid 40 days military training program which is allowed to replace the compulsory military service.

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