Sept. 15, 2021
Mayflies
(This entry is about insects, so please be careful if you don't like it.)
The other day, there was a huge outbreak of mayflies in my city. Around the bridge near my university, a large number of mayflies appeared and died in a moment. As a result, the bridge and road were covered with dead mayflies... I saw a short video on Twitter, and it was like a snow scene because white things fluttered and piled up, but it was all insects. Due to the dead bodies, it's said that a moped slipped, or walkers and bikes couldn't pass through. Just imagining the situation gives me a shudder.
Mayflies
(This entry is about insects, so please be careful if you don't like it. them)
What you said is fine but 'don't like them' works better here becauase insects is plural :)
The other day, there was a huge outbreak of mayflies in my city.
Around the bridge near my university, a large number of mayflies appeared and died in a momentalmost instantly.
Again, your original sentence is fine but this is how I would word it :)
As a result, the bridge and road were covered with dead mayflies...
I saw a short video on Twitter, and it was like a snow scene because white things fluttered and piled up, but it was all insects.
Due to the dead bodies, it's said that a moped slipped, or and walkers and bikes couldn't pass through.
I would use 'and' here because 'or' implies there was a choice of one or the other :)
Just imagining the situation gives me a shudder.
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How strange! Great job though :D
Sept. 16, 2021
Thank you so much!
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(This entry is about insects, so please be careful if you don't like it. ) (This entry is about insects, so please be careful if you don't like What you said is fine but 'don't like them' works better here becauase insects is plural :)
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The other day, there was a huge outbreak of mayflies in my city. |
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Around the bridge near my university, a large number of mayflies appeared and died in a moment. Around the bridge near my university, a large number of mayflies appeared and died Again, your original sentence is fine but this is how I would word it :)
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As a result, the bridge and road were covered with dead mayflies... |
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I saw a short video on Twitter, and it was like a snow scene because white things fluttered and piled up, but it was all insects. |
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Due to the dead bodies, it's said that a moped slipped, or walkers and bikes couldn't pass through. Due to the dead bodies, it's said that a moped slipped I would use 'and' here because 'or' implies there was a choice of one or the other :)
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Just imagining the situation gives me a shudder. |
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