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ponta 306 · May 22

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A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was 54 years old. Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard. They often fall in lack of sleep because they are super busy. If they are drawing a serial manga, they have a strict deadline every week. As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercise. It causes mental and physical disorders, which lead to death. The competition to be famous is intense, and they have to keep on drawing and planning the story.


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vmoll 0 May 22, 2021
Manga Artists
A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was 54 years old.

A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even though he was 54 years old.

Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard.
They often fall in lack of sleep because they are super busy.

They often fall insuffer from a lack of sleep because they are supeof their busy life.

If they are drawing a serial manga, they have a strict deadline every week.

If they are drawing a serial mangamanga series, they have a strict deadline every week.

As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercise.

As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exerciseing.

It causes mental and physical disorders, which lead to death.

It causes mental and physical disorders, which leads to death.

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Good job!
I agree that manga artists have a hard life! It's sad when they die young!
Comment added on 05/22/2021

ponta 306 May 23, 2021

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!
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will_im_not 0 May 22, 2021
Manga Artists
A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was 54 years old.

A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was only 54 years old.

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Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard.
They often fall in lack of sleep because they are super busy.

They often fall in lack ofdon't get enough sleep because they are super busy.

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I think that's what you meant here, not sure
If they are drawing a serial manga, they have a strict deadline every week.
As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercise.
It causes mental and physical disorders, which lead to death.
The competition to be famous is intense, and they have to keep on drawing and planning the story.
ponta 306 May 23, 2021

Thank you for your correction!

Thank you for your correction!