May 22, 2021
Manga Artists
A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was 54 years old. Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard. They often fall in lack of sleep because they are super busy. If they are drawing a serial manga, they have a strict deadline every week. As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercise. It causes mental and physical disorders, which lead to death. The competition to be famous is intense, and they have to keep on drawing and planning the story.
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Manga Artists
A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even though he was 54 years old. A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even though he was 54 years old.
Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard.
They often fall insuffer from a lack of sleep because they are supeof their busy life.
They often suffer from a lack of sleep because of their busy life.
If they are drawing a serial mangamanga series, they have a strict deadline every week.
If they are drawing a manga series, they have a strict deadline every week.
As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exerciseing.
As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercising.
It causes mental and physical disorders, which leads to death. It causes mental and physical disorders, which leads to death.
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Good job!
I agree that manga artists have a hard life! It's sad when they die young!
May 23, 2021
Thank you so much!
Manga Artists
A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was only 54 years old. A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was only 54 years old.
Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard.
They often fall in lack ofdon't get enough sleep because they are super busy.
They often don't get enough sleep because they are super busy.
I think that's what you meant here, not sure
If they are drawing a serial manga, they have a strict deadline every week.
As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercise.
It causes mental and physical disorders, which lead to death.
The competition to be famous is intense, and they have to keep on drawing and planning the story.
May 23, 2021
Thank you for your correction!
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A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was 54 years old. A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was only 54 years old. A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even he was only 54 years old. A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even though he was 54 years old. A couple of days ago, a famous manga artist passed away even though he was 54 years old. |
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Manga artists tend to die young because their life is hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They often fall in lack of sleep because they are super busy.
They often I think that's what you meant here, not sure
They often |
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If they are drawing a serial manga, they have a strict deadline every week. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
If they are drawing a |
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As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercise. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
As a result, they draw manga almost around the clock and cut down the time for eating and exercis |
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It causes mental and physical disorders, which lead to death. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It causes mental and physical disorders, which leads to death. It causes mental and physical disorders, which leads to death. |
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The competition to be famous is intense, and they have to keep on drawing and planning the story. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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