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I think this happens because, since we are kids, we acquire habits (good or bad habits, according to each one), we learn specific ways to do things, we have our own routines, etc.

so we are used to liveing in a specific way and Iit's okay,. the problem is when your life style clashes with the life style of people you live with.

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I have had several roommates and I have had a lot of problems living with unknown people as much as my own sister, but I have learned with every experience and I hope every time would be better of the othersthan the last.

Nobody really teaches us to live together with the others.

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“Whom” if you’re introducing a clause where the person is an object; “who” if the person acts as a subject.

Or “haven’t ever had,” depending on whether you are talking about in general or your own experiences.

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We have to be very open to listening, to learning and even to change if it's necessary.

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Nobody really teaches us to live together with the others.

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Try to avoid run on sentences as it makes your meaning unclear.

Usual one uses brackets to signify extra information that one could also leave out.
The dog was red (according to Susan).
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I think this happens because, sincewhen we are kids, we acquire habits ( both good or bad habits, according to each one), we learn specific ways to do things, we have our own routines etc.

so we are used to liveing in a specific way and Ithat's okay, t. The problem is when your life style clashes with the life style of people you live with.

That's the really big conflictproblem because, ion one hand, these things I wrote before are very personal (private) : personal hygiene, self care or house work. These are very delicate themesensitive subjects because, we have to be honest, no one is going to admit that he/she is a dirty person and. It's also It's true that we all are different and something unpleasant to me could be okay to another person.

I'm not sure if 'personal' is the right word here. If something is very personal, it tends to do with your health, mental health, family etc.

IOn the other hand, our house should be oura safer and more intimate place to be so Iit's a big dealproblem if we don't feel comfortable with our roommates or if we feel we ca'n't be ourselves.

If we want to live with other people, we have to learning to share our spaces and we have to keep in mind all of this in because Iit's very easy to think that we are right and the restat other people aren't.

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