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Ducky

Jun 23

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"La Nit de Sant Joan"

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers. In the last years we have a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real madness. Last weekend there was more of thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya. For this reason, many municipalities has banned the firecrackers, because is the cause of many fires. The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning influence in these fires too. On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

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This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

This night theDuring the festival of Sant Joan, people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

Starting the sentence with "this night" sounds awkward.
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This night, the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

In the last years we have a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real madness.

InOver the last few years we have a dilemma with this tradition forhad several dilemmas due to the very high number of fires in the woods, -it is a real madness.

In the last few years, we haved a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real. It’s madness.

Last weekend there was more of thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

Last weekend, there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

For this reason, many municipalities has banned the firecrackers, because is the cause of many fires.

For this reason, mMany municipalities hasve banned the use of firecrackers, because is they cause of many fires.

"For this reason" is redundant because you give the reason later in the sentence.

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning influence in these fires too.

The high temperatures and lack of"messy" forests cleaning influence in thesethe high number of fires, too.

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning in the forests have an influence ion these fires too.

I’m not sure what you wanted to say here.
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On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

On the other handAdditionally, many animals are very sensitive to the strongloud noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

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