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Kist

July 8, 2022

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Journal about my Day

Today I got up of my bed at 8:30am, even though my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before. My intention is to reorganize my sleeping hours and perform the routine I want. So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had allergy and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up. My tiredness won me, so I went to sleep again. I ended up getting out of bed at noon. I feel terrible when this things happens, although I know they are my fault. I wasted all my morning, and then I continue my day so out of order. To avoid wasting time on my days, I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list and check my agenda to keep tracking on things I have been doing. I know that all this is a result of my unemployment.
As a result of having so much time free, I have found myself leaning back.
On the other hand, this does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day. I still having a plan, and I literally spend a bunch of hours looking for a job, learning English through a study program I made myself, working out, and learning about the career I truly desire to perform. Because looking for a job, is a job too! and is exhausting. So, getting back to my wake up hours, tomorrow no matter what how tired or whatever might happen to me I will wake up at 6:30am.

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Today I got up of my bed at 8:30am, even though my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

My intention is to reorganize my sleeping hours and perform the routine I want.

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had allergyies and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

My tiredness won me, so I went to sleep again.

I ended up getting out of bed at noon.

I feel terrible when thisese things happens, although I know they are my fault.

I wasted all of my morning, and then I continued my day so out of order.

To avoid wasting time on my days, I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list and check my agenda to keep tracking onf things I have been doing the evening before.

I know that all this is a result of my unemployment.

As a result of having so much time free, I have found myself leaning back.

On the other hand, this does not means that I am comfortable and watching tvTV all day.

I still having a plan, and I literally spend a bunch of hours looking for a job, learning English through a study program I made myself, working out, and learning about the career I truly desire to perform.

Better: "...learning about the job I actually want to have."

Because looking for a job, is a job too!

aAnd it is exhausting.

So, I'm getting back to my wake up hours,time tomorrow no matter what how tired or wI might be. Whatever might happen to me, I will wake up at 6:30am.

Feedback

It's hard for me to get up on time too! Good luck!

Today I got upout of my bed at 8:30am, even though my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

My intention is to reorganize my sleeping hours and perform the routine I want.

makes sense as a sentence and is grammatically correct, but isn't very natural. i'd probably say something like "I want to change my sleeping pattern so that I can have a better daily routine."

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had allergyies and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

My tiredness won me, so I went to sleep again.

I feel terrible when this things happens, although I know they areit is my fault.

I wasted all mymy entire morning, and then I continued my day so out of order.

"so" also isn't very natural, but it still works. i'd use "very" instead.

To avoid wasting time on myduring the days, I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list the evening before and check my agenda to keep tracking onf things I have been doing.

On the other hand, this does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day.

I still havinge a plan, and I literally spend a bunch of hours looking for a job, learning English through a study program I made myself, working out, and learning about the career I truly desire to performhave.

with "career", we usually use "to have" instead of "to perform".

Because looking for a job, is a job too!

aAnd it is exhausting.

So, getting back to mywhen I wake up hours, tomorrow no matter what how tired I am or whatever might happen to me, I will wake up at 6:30am.

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Kist

July 8, 2022

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My intention is to reorganize my sleeping hours and perform the routine I want.

makes sense as a sentence and is grammatically correct, but isn't very natural. i'd probably say something like "I want to change my sleeping pattern so that I can have a better daily routine."

Thank you! that's exactly what I want, to sound naturally.

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Kist

July 8, 2022

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Thank you!

Today I got up of my bed at 8:30am, even though the night before my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had an allergyic reaction and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

My tiredness wonovercame me, so I went to sleep again.

I feel terrible when this things happens, although I know they are my fault.

this thing happens / these things happen

To avoid wasting time on myduring the days , I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list and check my agenda to keep tracking onf things I have been doing.

On the other hand, tThis does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day.

On the one hand... On the other hand...

Feedback

I know how you feel man, I went through a period just like this. Some people think being unemployed is easy, but it absolutely is not.
Keep applying for jobs, keep working out, and keep studying!

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Kist

July 9, 2022

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Hey, it is not. I appreciate it!

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Kist

July 9, 2022

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On the other hand, tThis does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day.

On the one hand... On the other hand...

Could explain me what did you mean here? I don’t know how to use it.

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scottibiscotti

July 9, 2022

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If you say "On the one hand", it must be followed by "On the other hand". We use this structure when comparing two things.
E.g. "I don't have a job at the moment. On the one hand, this means that I have a lot of time to study foreign languages. On the other hand, I don't have enough money to travel abroad."

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Kist

July 9, 2022

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If you say "On the one hand", it must be followed by "On the other hand". We use this structure when comparing two things. E.g. "I don't have a job at the moment. On the one hand, this means that I have a lot of time to study foreign languages. On the other hand, I don't have enough money to travel abroad."

Thank you so much 😊

Journal about my Day

Today I got up of my bed at 8:30am, even though my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

Today I got up of my bed at 8:30am, even though my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

Today I got upout of my bed at 8:30am, even though my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

Today I got up of my bed at 8:30am, even though the night before my alarm was set up for 6:30am the night before.

My intention is to reorganize my sleeping hours and perform the routine I want.

My intention is to reorganize my sleeping hours and perform the routine I want.

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had allergy and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had allergyies and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had allergyies and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

So, when I woke up this mourning I did not feel well, I had an allergyic reaction and started sneezing uncontrollably as soon as I got up.

My tiredness won me, so I went to sleep again.

My tiredness won me, so I went to sleep again.

My tiredness won me, so I went to sleep again.

My tiredness wonovercame me, so I went to sleep again.

I ended up getting out of bed at noon.

I feel terrible when this things happens, although I know they are my fault.

I feel terrible when thisese things happens, although I know they are my fault.

I feel terrible when this things happens, although I know they areit is my fault.

I feel terrible when this things happens, although I know they are my fault.

I wasted all my morning, and then I continue my day so out of order.

I wasted all of my morning, and then I continued my day so out of order.

I wasted all mymy entire morning, and then I continued my day so out of order.

To avoid wasting time on my days, I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list and check my agenda to keep tracking on things I have been doing.

To avoid wasting time on myduring the days, I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list the evening before and check my agenda to keep tracking onf things I have been doing.

To avoid wasting time on myduring the days , I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list and check my agenda to keep tracking onf things I have been doing.

To avoid wasting time on my days, I always try the evening before to prepare my to do list and check my agenda to keep tracking onf things I have been doing the evening before.

I know that all this is a result of my unemployment.

As a result of having so much time free, I have found myself leaning back.

On the other hand, this does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day.

On the other hand, this does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day.

On the other hand, tThis does not means that I am comfortable and watching tv all day.

On the other hand, this does not means that I am comfortable and watching tvTV all day.

I still having a plan, and I literally spend a bunch of hours looking for a job, learning English through a study program I made myself, working out, and learning about the career I truly desire to perform.

I still havinge a plan, and I literally spend a bunch of hours looking for a job, learning English through a study program I made myself, working out, and learning about the career I truly desire to performhave.

I still having a plan, and I literally spend a bunch of hours looking for a job, learning English through a study program I made myself, working out, and learning about the career I truly desire to perform.

Because looking for a job, is a job too!

Because looking for a job, is a job too!

Because looking for a job, is a job too!

and is exhausting.

aAnd it is exhausting.

aAnd it is exhausting.

So, getting back to my wake up hours, tomorrow no matter what how tired or whatever might happen to me I will wake up at 6:30am.

So, getting back to mywhen I wake up hours, tomorrow no matter what how tired I am or whatever might happen to me, I will wake up at 6:30am.

So, I'm getting back to my wake up hours,time tomorrow no matter what how tired or wI might be. Whatever might happen to me, I will wake up at 6:30am.

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