Sept. 21, 2021
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Today is the Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival. According to Chinese tradition, my family will eat together to celebrate it. I already have a granddaughter and she is four years old this year. She lives with her parents. I rarely see her and her parents because we don't live together. My mother is more than ninety years old and she has senile dementia, so she often has an unclear mind. I have to accompany my mother in daily life although we hired a caregiver. So our families don't see each other so often, let alone eat together. Today I bought fruit and a lot of delicious food because I really want to have a bigger dinner with my family of four generations. And I really want to see my granddaughter. It's been a long time since the last time I saw her. Expecting a happy dinner right now.
Journal
Today is the Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival.
According to Chinese tradition, my family will eathave a big dinner together to celebrate it.
I already have a granddaughter and she is four years old this year.
She lives with her parents.
I rarely see her and her parents because we don't live together.
My mother is more than ninety years old and she has senile dementia, so she often has an unclear mind.
I have to accompany my mother in her daily life, although we have hired a caregiver.
So, our families don't see each other so often, let alone eat together.
Today I bought fruit and a lot of delicious food because I really want to have a bigger dinner with my family of four generations.
And I really want to see my granddaughter.
It's been a long time since theI last time I saw her.
Expecting a happy dinner right now.
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Nice writing! Happy Mid-autumn Festival and hope you have a good time with your family!
Sept. 21, 2021
Thank you very much for your corrections and your best wishes.
Journal
Today is the Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival.
According to Chinese tradition, my family will eat together to celebrate it.
I already have a granddaughter and she is four years old this year.
She lives with her parents.
I rarely see her and her parents because we don't live together.
My mother is more than ninety years old and she has senile dementia, so she often has an unclear mind.
I have to accompany my mother in daily life although we hired a caregiver.
So our families don't see each other so often, let alone eat together.
Today I bought fruit and a lot of delicious food because I really want to have a bigger dinner with my family of four generations.
And I really want to see my granddaughter.
It's been a long time since the last time I saw her.
EI am expecting a happy dinner right now.
Feedback
Excellent! I made mostly stylistic changes to make your writing sound more natural.
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Today is the Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival. |
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According to Chinese tradition, my family will eat together to celebrate it. According to Chinese tradition, my family will |
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I already have a granddaughter and she is four years old this year. |
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She lives with her parents. |
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I rarely see her and her parents because we don't live together. |
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My mother is more than ninety years old and she has senile dementia, so she often has an unclear mind. My mother is more than ninety years old and she has My mother is more than ninety years old and she has |
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I have to accompany my mother in daily life although we hired a caregiver. I have to accompany my mother in her daily life, although we have hired a caregiver. |
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So our families don't see each other so often, let alone eat together. So our families don't see each other So, our families don't see each other so often, let alone eat together. |
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Today I bought fruit and a lot of delicious food because I really want to have a bigger dinner with my family of four generations. Today I bought fruit and a lot of delicious food because I really want to have a big |
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And I really want to see my granddaughter. |
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It's been a long time since the last time I saw her. It's been a long time since |
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Expecting a happy dinner right now.
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