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Jack 0 · Sept. 14

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The first picture was taken from one of the public parks in our city. What attracts me the most to taking a picture is those big, taller platanus trees. As you can see, the trees are carefully trimmed and their branches grow around them. This is not special enough. I remember that decades ago, alongside both sides of the People's Road of our city, there were rows of even taller big platanus trees. Their branches grow even horizontally, thus the streets are all under the shade of those platanus. Even in the hot summer, you won't get a spot of tanning when you walk on the street, and feel very cool. That is why I am so impressed with platanus trees.


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sivanc 0 Sept. 14, 2021
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The first picture was taken from one of the public parks in our city.

The first picture was taken fromin one of the public parks in our city.

What attracts me the most to taking a picture is those big, taller platanus trees.

What attractdraws me in the most abouto taking a picture is those big, taller platanus trees.

As you can see, the trees are carefully trimmed and their branches grow around them.
This is not special enough.

This is not special enough.

Not really sure what you mean here.
I remember that decades ago, alongside both sides of the People's Road of our city, there were rows of even taller big platanus trees.

I remember that decades ago, alongside both sides of the People's Road ofin our city, there were rows of even taller bigand bigger platanus trees.

Their branches grow even horizontally, thus the streets are all under the shade of those platanus.

Their branches groew evenly and horizontally, thus the streets awere all undercovered by the shade of those platanus trees.

Even in the hot summer, you won't get a spot of tanning when you walk on the street, and feel very cool.

Even in the hot summer, you won't get a spot of tanningtan whatsoever when you walk on the street, and you'll feel very cool.

That is why I am so impressed with platanus trees.

Overall feedback & comment:

Sounds like a handy tree! Good job
Comment added on 09/14/2021