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Sept. 12, 2021

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Indeed, spring and autumn are the most comfortable seasons here.
If I have to choose which kind of mooncake I like, my answer is, red bean paste and egg yolk mooncake, but it must not be too sweaty and salty.
In the second half of last month, our government conducted a thorough investigation of the vaccination situation. If there are no medical contraindications, every personnel must be vaccinated.
Farmers in the past indeed depended on the weather for meals. At that time, agricultural productivity was extremely low, there were no chemical fertilizers, no pesticides, no improved varieties and no advanced technologies. If there was no more favorable weather, farmers would really face hunger.
China has an old saying called "穷人的孩子早当家" and another idiom called "纨绔子弟". The former means that children living in poor families know the hardships and difficulties from young ages, so they know how to work hard to help their families and share the worries of their parents. While the latter refers to a young man who was born in a wealthy family, has no worries about food and clothing, only knows how to eat, drink and have fun, and is not doing any business.
Every time I see the pictures you sent, I feel relaxed and happy. Wide glass windows with forests, lakes, blue skies and white clouds outside the window. It is really paradise.
Hopefully one day, I can go to Canada, because more than one person has told me that the environment in Canada is really beautiful.

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Indeed, spring and autumn are the most comfortable seasons here.

If I haved to choose which kind of mooncake I like, my answer is,would be red bean paste and egg yolk mooncake, but it must not be too sweaty and salty.

Sweaty is like 汗水 lol.

In the second half of last month, our government conducted a thorough investigation of the vaccination situation.

I think it might be better to say 'compiled a report about', investigation is more like 调查 like they are completely unaware of the situation.

If there are no medical contraindicaexemptions, every personnel must be vaccinated.

Farmers in the past indeed depended heavily on the weather for their meals.

At that time, agricultural productivity was extremely low, there were no chemical fertilizers, no pesticides, no improved varieties and no advanced technologies.

If there was no more favorable weather, farmers would really faceface serious hunger.

China has an old saying called, "穷人的孩子早当家" and another idiom called, "纨绔子弟".

The former means that children living in poor families know the hardships and difficulties from young ages, so they know how to work hard to help their families and share the worries of their parents.

While tThe latter refers to a young man who was born into a wealthy family, has no worries about food and clothing, only knows how to eat, drink and have fun, and is not doing any business.

Every time I seelook at the pictures you sent, I feel relaxed and happy.

Wide glass windows with forests, lakes, blue skies and white clouds outside the window.

It is really is paradise.

Hopefully, one day, I can go to Canada, because more than one person has told me that the environmentnatural landscape in Canada is really beautiful.

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Nice writing! Canada truly is very beautiful, although I'm partial to the Northwest in general (which is part U.S. part Canada).

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Jack

Sept. 12, 2021

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If I haved to choose which kind of mooncake I like, my answer is,would be red bean paste and egg yolk mooncake, but it must not be too sweaty and salty.

Sweaty is like 汗水 lol.

I meant too sweet. If I had….it would be… what is the usage?

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Jack

Sept. 12, 2021

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Thank you so much for your help.

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sivanc

Sept. 12, 2021

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I meant too sweet. If I had….it would be… what is the usage?

You said basically "If I had to choose...my answer would be...", 可以等于“要选的话...应该会首选/选择...”这样的意思。It implies that you don't like mooncakes very much, but you would prefer ones with red bean paste or egg yolk if you had to eat one. Another example: "I don't exercise very much but, if I had to, I would ride my bike, because I like the feeling of the wind."

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Jack

Sept. 13, 2021

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Okay, thank you very much.

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Indeed, spring and autumn are the most comfortable seasons here.

If I have to choose which kind of mooncake I like, my answer is, red bean paste and egg yolk mooncake, but it must not be too sweaty and salty.

If I haved to choose which kind of mooncake I like, my answer is,would be red bean paste and egg yolk mooncake, but it must not be too sweaty and salty.

In the second half of last month, our government conducted a thorough investigation of the vaccination situation.

In the second half of last month, our government conducted a thorough investigation of the vaccination situation.

If there are no medical contraindications, every personnel must be vaccinated.

If there are no medical contraindicaexemptions, every personnel must be vaccinated.

Farmers in the past indeed depended on the weather for meals.

Farmers in the past indeed depended heavily on the weather for their meals.

At that time, agricultural productivity was extremely low, there were no chemical fertilizers, no pesticides, no improved varieties and no advanced technologies.

If there was no more favorable weather, farmers would really face hunger.

If there was no more favorable weather, farmers would really faceface serious hunger.

China has an old saying called "穷人的孩子早当家" and another idiom called "纨绔子弟".

China has an old saying called, "穷人的孩子早当家" and another idiom called, "纨绔子弟".

The former means that children living in poor families know the hardships and difficulties from young ages, so they know how to work hard to help their families and share the worries of their parents.

While the latter refers to a young man who was born in a wealthy family, has no worries about food and clothing, only knows how to eat, drink and have fun, and is not doing any business.

While tThe latter refers to a young man who was born into a wealthy family, has no worries about food and clothing, only knows how to eat, drink and have fun, and is not doing any business.

Every time I see the pictures you sent, I feel relaxed and happy.

Every time I seelook at the pictures you sent, I feel relaxed and happy.

Wide glass windows with forests, lakes, blue skies and white clouds outside the window.

Wide glass windows with forests, lakes, blue skies and white clouds outside the window.

It is really paradise.

It is really is paradise.

Hopefully one day, I can go to Canada, because more than one person has told me that the environment in Canada is really beautiful.

Hopefully, one day, I can go to Canada, because more than one person has told me that the environmentnatural landscape in Canada is really beautiful.

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