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Journal 22/3/20

I can’t remember which year I went to Wanfuhu, but it was definitely not a long time ago. In fact, Wanfuhu is a reservoir which is located in Shucheng County, Anhui province. But now, it is also a 5A scenic spot in China. Its view is really beautiful: a large area of water is distributed among the hills (because it is located at the foot of the northeast Dabie mountain) and many small islands are distributed among the water. It is a combination of mountains, islands, water, various green trees and colorful flowers. You can imagine how beautiful it is. If only I live in a place with mountains, sea, lakes, rivers, green trees and colorful flowers.

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I can’t remember whichat year I went to Wanfuhu, but it was definitely not a long time ago.

Its view is really beautiful: a large area of water is distributed among the hills (because it is located at the foot of the northeast Dabie mountain) and m. Many small islands are distributed among the waterlake.

Not really a mistake, just a better way to write it.

It is a combination of mountains, islands, waterlakes, various green trees and colorful flowers.

You can imagine how beautiful it is.

If only I lived in a place with mountains, seas, lakes, rivers, green trees and colorful flowers.

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Nicely written

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Jack

Dec. 3, 2020

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Thank you very much.

Journal 22/3/20

I can’t remember which year I went to Wanfuhu, but it was definitely not a long time ago.

I can’t remember whichat year I went to Wanfuhu, but it was definitely not a long time ago.

In fact, Wanfuhu is a reservoir which is located in Shucheng County, Anhui province.

But now, it is also a 5A scenic spot in China.

Its view is really beautiful: a large area of water is distributed among the hills (because it is located at the foot of the northeast Dabie mountain) and many small islands are distributed among the water.

Its view is really beautiful: a large area of water is distributed among the hills (because it is located at the foot of the northeast Dabie mountain) and m. Many small islands are distributed among the waterlake.

It is a combination of mountains, islands, water, various green trees and colorful flowers.

It is a combination of mountains, islands, waterlakes, various green trees and colorful flowers.

You can imagine how beautiful it is.

If only I live in a place with mountains, sea, lakes, rivers, green trees and colorful flowers.

If only I lived in a place with mountains, seas, lakes, rivers, green trees and colorful flowers.

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