Nov. 24, 2020
Journal 11/24/20
Is there any difference compared to Fuyang? When we are young, the world is our home, but when we are older, home is our world.
Journal 11/24/20
ICompared to Fuyang, is there any difference compared to Fuyang?
I reordered this sentence in a way I think feels more natural, but this needs more context to be properly corrected.
When we are young, the world is our home, but when we are older, home is our world.
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I know in Chinese it's quite normal to ask yourself a question and answer it. It's a bit weird in English, however.
Dec. 25, 2020
I translated your first journal that was on this site, and I also posted it here. Please go check to see if it’s well done.
Is there any difference compared to Fuyang?
Not sure what you mean here.
When we are young, the world is our home, but when we are older, our home is our world.
Nov. 24, 2020
I shot some pictures in Hefei, and I wanted to compare it to our home city Fuyang, but I cannot post the pictures on this site. Thank you for your corrections.
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Is there any difference compared to Fuyang? Is there any difference compared to Fuyang? Not sure what you mean here.
I reordered this sentence in a way I think feels more natural, but this needs more context to be properly corrected.
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When we are young, the world is our home, but when we are older, home is our world. When we are young, the world is our home, but when we are older, our home is our world. |
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