Nov. 10, 2020
I have worked for many years, and l have changed several work units. My current work unit is a public institution which is responsible for the training of agriculture and farmers in our district. I came to this work unit in June this year, so I have worked for five months now in my new work unit. Our main job is to train new types of professional farmers. The category of training includes fruit production, vegetable production, livestock breeding and so on. The main idea is to help the farmers make good performance in these fields to improve their income and promote the development of rural economy. Each class will last different days according to their nature. The shortest class only lasts five days and the longest class will last sixteen days. Of course, some classes may last ten days or so. The training contains theory study and field training, and the two kinds of training usually take up half of the time. When each class started, we hired teachers and rented hotels for the training. This is something about my work unit and my job. I hope I have made it clear.
Journal 11/10/20
I have worked for many years, and l have changed several work units several times.
avoid using so many commas, they indicate a pause when speaking so it can disrupt the flow of your sentence.
My current work unit is at a public institution which is responsible for the training of agriculture and farmers in our district.
I came to this work unit in June of this year, so I have worked for five months now in my new work unit.
Our main job is to train new types of professional farmers.
The category of trainingtraining categories includes fruit production, vegetable production, livestock breeding and so on.
The main idea is to help the farmers make good performance well in these fields to improve their income and promote the development of rural economy.
Each class will last different daysamounts of time according to their nature.
This was a hard sentence to correct, I personally would just reword the entire thing to:
Depending on the class, they last for different amounts of time.
The shortest class only lasts five days and the longest class will last sixteen days.
Of course, some classes may last ten days or so.
When each class started, we hired teachers and rented hotels for the training.
This is something about my work unit and my job.
I hope I have made it clear.
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Journal 11/10/20 |
I have worked for many years, and l have changed several work units. I have worked for many years I have worked for many years avoid using so many commas, they indicate a pause when speaking so it can disrupt the flow of your sentence.
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My current work unit is a public institution which is responsible for the training of agriculture and farmers in our district. My current work unit is a public institution You cannot say training agriculture.
My current work unit is at a public institution which is responsible for the training of agriculture and farmers in our district. |
I came to this work unit in June this year, so I have worked for five months now in my new work unit. I I came to this work unit in June of this year, so I have worked for five months now in my new work unit. |
Our main job is to train new types of professional farmers.
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The category of training includes fruit production, vegetable production, livestock breeding and so on. The The |
The main idea is to help the farmers make good performance in these fields to improve their income and promote the development of rural economy.
The main idea is to help the farmers |
Each class will last different days according to their nature.
Each class will last different This was a hard sentence to correct, I personally would just reword the entire thing to:
Depending on the class, they last for different amounts of time. |
The shortest class only lasts five days and the longest class will last sixteen days. The |
Of course, some classes may last ten days or so.
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The training contains theory study and field training, and the two kinds of training usually take up half of the time. The |
When each class started, we hired teachers and rented hotels for the training.
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This is something about my work unit and my job. This is |
I hope I have made it clear. |
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