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Japanese Public Servants

In Japan, doctors have to report by fax to the government offices. This matter got many laughs from overseas countries. When I watched this news, I was not surprised at all because we have had many problems and troubles with public servants, both of who work for the national and the regional government. We frequently get furious with not only this old-fashioned way but their high handed behaviors. When I went to a city office to get my Certificate of Residence long ago during my lunch break, I had to wait for around fifty minutes. I handed in an application to a servant and the servant went to an drink vendor. He talked with the vendor woman for twenty minutes and went to his desk to put his drinks. When he met a coworker on the way back to me, he talked with the coworker for twenty minutes. Finally, he came back to me and took my application. He went back to his desk and drank his drink, chatting with a coworker for five minutes. After that, he went to a computer and put something and printed out a certificate and came back to me. Once I received the certificate, he told me that I was disturbing the next person so I should go away from there right away and shouted "Next! Come quickly!" After me, five people stood in line. Probably the last person would be treated with the next day.
In Japan, it is said that ten public servants do a job which is done by one worker in a company.
We pay taxes and this tax funds provide them with their salaries. Even though they do not work, they can get their paychecks. That is why they try hard to avoid working as much as possible.
Many of Japanese mothers ask their children to be a public servant because they can get good paychecks and bonus even though the economy is in recession.
When I went to a traditional bar restaurant near Tokyo station, the mistress said that capable servants were all transferred to the branch offices so the servant in headquarters are all foolish.
I and friends were doubting what she said because it is difficult to be a public servant. As for the entrance examination, there are so many applicants that the hiring rate becomes very low, eventually, the young people with a higher academic background are hired.
However, when I lived near Tokyo station for a while, I realized what the mistress said was true.
Also, a friend who works for a regional government said the staff there can buy any expensive tea and coffee they want to drink by the office expense. According to an investigate, many of customers who go to brothels are public servants. I understand that not all public servants do such things but I think many do because they have much more money and time to waste than the workers in companies.
Taiwan's digital minister is 39 years old. She made good applications for the coronavirus so Taiwan is not so bad situation.
On the other hand, Japanese minister in charge of IT is 79 years old. I believe he does not know what IT stands for.

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Japanese Public Servants

In Japan, doctors have to report by fax to the government offices.

This (matter) gotets many laughs from overseas countries.

The sentence is grammatically correct. However, English speakers normally omit "matter" and just say "this gets many laughs..." when saying something like that.

When I watched this on the news, I was not surprised at all because we have had many problems and troubles with public servants, both of who work for the national and the regional government.

We frequently get furious with not only this old-fashioned way butmindset but also their high handed behaviors.

"Way" isn't really a proper word to use in this context. That refers more to a mathod, like "the best way to make cakes."

When I went to a city office to get my Certificate of Residence long ago during my lunch break a while ago, I had to wait for around fifty minutes.

People use "long ago" to refer to ancient times, like in fairy tales. "A while ago" also refers to a long time ago, but in a more modern context and usage.

I handed in an application to a servant and the servant went to an drink vendor.

Since "drink" starts with a consonant, this should be "a".

He talked with the vendor woman for twenty minutes and then went to his desk to put his drinks down.

When He then met a coworker on the way back to me, heand talked with the coworker for twenty minutes.

Finally, he came back to me and took my application.

He went back to his desk and drank his drink, chatting with a coworker for five minutes.

After that, he went to a computer and put, typed something andin, printed out a certificate, and came back to me.

Once I received the certificate, he told me that I was disturbing the next person so I should go away from there. He also said that I should go right away and shouted "Next!

This sentence can also be split into two to make it easier to read.

After me, fFive people stood in line after me.

Probably tThe last person would probably be treated withon the next day.

In Japan, it is said that ten public servants can do a job which is done by one worker in a company.

We pay taxes and thisese tax funds provide them with their salaries.

Even though they do not work, they can get their paychecks.

That is why they try hard to avoid working as much as possible.

Many of Japanese mothers ask their children to be acome public servants because they can get good paychecks and bonuses even though the economy is in a recession.

When I went to a traditional bar restaurant near Tokyo sStation, the mistress said that capable servants were all transferred to the branch offices so the servants in headquarters awere all foolish.

I andMy friends wereand I doubtinged what she said because it is difficult to be a public servant.

As for the entrance examination, there are so many applicants that the hiring rate becomes very low, e. Eventually, the young people with a higher academic background are hired.

This sentence can be broken up into two to make it easier to read.

However, when I lived near Tokyo sStation for a while, I realized what the mistress said was true.

Also, a friend who works for a regional government said the staff there canould buy any expensive tea and coffee they wanted to drink by the office's expense.

According to an investigateion, many of customers who go to brothels are public servants.

I understand that not all public servants do such things but I think many do because they have much more money and time to waste than the workers in companies.

Taiwan's digital minister is 39 years old.

She made good applications for the coronavirus so Taiwan is not soin such a bad situation.

On the other hand, the Japanese minister in charge of IT is 79 years old.

I believe he does not know what IT stands for.

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Tamochan

May 21, 2020

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Thank you so much! Your explanations are very helpful!

Japanese Public Servants

We frequently get furiousare frustrated with not only thiseir old-fashioned ways but their high -handed behaviors.

Finally, he came back to me and took my application.

He went back to his desk and drank his drink, chatting with a coworker for five minutes.

That is why they try hard to avoid working as much as possible.

I andMy friends wereand I doubtinged what she said, because it is difficult to be a public servant.

I believe he does not know what IT stands for.

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Tamochan

May 25, 2020

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Thank you so much!

Japanese Public Servants

In Japan, doctors have to report by fax to the government offices.

This matter got manycauses a lot of laughster from overseas countries.

When I watchedsaw this news, I was not surprised at all because we have had many problems and troubles with public servants, both of who work for both the national and the regional government.

"Watched" focuses more on the person, where "Saw" focuses more on the content of what you're watching.

We frequently get furious with not only thiseir old-fashioned ways but their high handed behaviors.

When I went to a city office to get my Certificate of Residence long ago during my lunch break, I had to wait for around fifty minutes.

I handed in an application to a servantclerk and the servant went to an drink vend convenience store.

Although we use the term "public servant" in a polite way, referring to one as a "servant" would sound a bit rude, as it sounds a bit too much like a slave. Something like "Clerk" (although this is old fashioned), "attendant", "receptionist" would work.

Although drink vendor makes sense, plenty of anglo countries (like mine) wouldn't really have any - "convenience store" or "street vendor" would be closest.

He talked with the vendor woman for twenty minutes and went to his desk to put his drinks away.

When he metHe then bumped into a coworker on tas he ways walking back to me, heand talked with the coworkerm for twenty minutes.

Instead of "Met", "bumped into" makes the encounter sound more like a coincidence.

He went back to his desk and drank his drink, chatting with a coworker for five minutes.

After that, he went to a computer and put, typed something and, printed out a certificate, and came back to me.

Once I received the certificate, he told me that I was disturbing the next person, soaid that I should go away from there right away, and shouted "Next!

This is more of a style thing, but I added more commas and broke up the sentence to slow down the pace.

Come quickly!"

After me, fFive people stood in line behind me.

Probably tThe last person would be treated with the next dayprobably only be helped tomorrow.

We pay taxes, and this tax funds provides them with their salaries.

Even thoughif they do not work, they can get their paychecks.

That is why they try hard to avoid working as much as possible.

Many of Japanese mothers ask their children to be a public servant because they can get good paychecks and bonus even though the economy is in recession.

When I went to a traditional bar restaurant near Tokyo station, the mistressbartender said that capable servanbureaucrats were all transferred to the branch offices so the servantbecause the bureaucrats in headquarters are allso foolish.

You could also use "bureaucrats", which is a more modern but slightly derogatory term for clerk. Also had to guess a bit what you meant here.

I andMy friends wereand I doubtinged what she said because it is difficult to be a public servant.

As for the entrance examinationapplying for the job, there are so many applicants that the hiring rate becomeis very low, eventually, theso generally young people with a higher academic background are hired.

However, when I lived near Tokyo station for a while, I realized what the mistressbartender said was true.

Also, a friend who works for a regional government saidtold me that the staff there can buy any expensive tea and coffee they want to drink byat the office's expense.

According to an investigate, many of customersion I read, many people who go to brothels are public servants.

I understand that not all public servants do such things but I think many do because they have much more money and time to waste than the workers in companies.

Taiwan's digitaltechnology minister is 39 years old.

She made good applicpreparations for the coronavirus so Taiwan is not soin such a bad situation.

On the other hand, the Japanese minister in charge of ITtechnology is 79 years old.

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This is generally good! I found this enjoyable to read - your sense of humor comes across, and I found a lot of it quite funny.

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Tamochan

May 21, 2020

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Thank you so much! I'm glad to know I made you laugh. I learned good expressions from you. Those are very helpful!

Japanese Public Servants

In Japan, doctors have to report by fax to the government offices.

This matter got many laughs from overseas countries.

This (matter) gotets many laughs from overseas countries.

This matter got manycauses a lot of laughster from overseas countries.

When I watched this news, I was not surprised at all because we have had many problems and troubles with public servants, both of who work for the national and the regional government.

When I watched this on the news, I was not surprised at all because we have had many problems and troubles with public servants, both of who work for the national and the regional government.

When I watchedsaw this news, I was not surprised at all because we have had many problems and troubles with public servants, both of who work for both the national and the regional government.

We frequently get furious with not only this old-fashioned way but their high handed behaviors.

We frequently get furious with not only this old-fashioned way butmindset but also their high handed behaviors.

We frequently get furious with not only thiseir old-fashioned ways but their high handed behaviors.

We frequently get furiousare frustrated with not only thiseir old-fashioned ways but their high -handed behaviors.

When I went to a city office to get my Certificate of Residence long ago during my lunch break, I had to wait for around fifty minutes.

When I went to a city office to get my Certificate of Residence long ago during my lunch break a while ago, I had to wait for around fifty minutes.

I handed in an application to a servant and the servant went to an drink vendor.

I handed in an application to a servantclerk and the servant went to an drink vend convenience store.

I handed in an application to a servant and the servant went to an drink vendor.

He talked with the vendor woman for twenty minutes and went to his desk to put his drinks.

He talked with the vendor woman for twenty minutes and then went to his desk to put his drinks down.

He talked with the vendor woman for twenty minutes and went to his desk to put his drinks away.

When he met a coworker on the way back to me, he talked with the coworker for twenty minutes.

When He then met a coworker on the way back to me, heand talked with the coworker for twenty minutes.

When he metHe then bumped into a coworker on tas he ways walking back to me, heand talked with the coworkerm for twenty minutes.

Finally, he came back to me and took my application.

He went back to his desk and drank his drink, chatting with a coworker for five minutes.

After that, he went to a computer and put something and printed out a certificate and came back to me.

After that, he went to a computer and put, typed something andin, printed out a certificate, and came back to me.

After that, he went to a computer and put, typed something and, printed out a certificate, and came back to me.

Once I received the certificate, he told me that I was disturbing the next person so I should go away from there right away and shouted "Next!

Once I received the certificate, he told me that I was disturbing the next person so I should go away from there. He also said that I should go right away and shouted "Next!

Once I received the certificate, he told me that I was disturbing the next person, soaid that I should go away from there right away, and shouted "Next!

Come quickly!"

After me, five people stood in line.

After me, fFive people stood in line after me.

After me, fFive people stood in line behind me.

Probably the last person would be treated with the next day.

Probably tThe last person would probably be treated withon the next day.

Probably tThe last person would be treated with the next dayprobably only be helped tomorrow.

In Japan, it is said that ten public servants do a job which is done by one worker in a company.

In Japan, it is said that ten public servants can do a job which is done by one worker in a company.

We pay taxes and this tax funds provide them with their salaries.

We pay taxes and thisese tax funds provide them with their salaries.

We pay taxes, and this tax funds provides them with their salaries.

Even though they do not work, they can get their paychecks.

Even thoughif they do not work, they can get their paychecks.

That is why they try hard to avoid working as much as possible.

Many of Japanese mothers ask their children to be a public servant because they can get good paychecks and bonus even though the economy is in recession.

Many of Japanese mothers ask their children to be acome public servants because they can get good paychecks and bonuses even though the economy is in a recession.

Many of Japanese mothers ask their children to be a public servant because they can get good paychecks and bonus even though the economy is in recession.

When I went to a traditional bar restaurant near Tokyo station, the mistress said that capable servants were all transferred to the branch offices so the servant in headquarters are all foolish.

When I went to a traditional bar restaurant near Tokyo sStation, the mistress said that capable servants were all transferred to the branch offices so the servants in headquarters awere all foolish.

When I went to a traditional bar restaurant near Tokyo station, the mistressbartender said that capable servanbureaucrats were all transferred to the branch offices so the servantbecause the bureaucrats in headquarters are allso foolish.

I and friends were doubting what she said because it is difficult to be a public servant.

I andMy friends wereand I doubtinged what she said because it is difficult to be a public servant.

I andMy friends wereand I doubtinged what she said because it is difficult to be a public servant.

I andMy friends wereand I doubtinged what she said, because it is difficult to be a public servant.

As for the entrance examination, there are so many applicants that the hiring rate becomes very low, eventually, the young people with a higher academic background are hired.

As for the entrance examination, there are so many applicants that the hiring rate becomes very low, e. Eventually, the young people with a higher academic background are hired.

As for the entrance examinationapplying for the job, there are so many applicants that the hiring rate becomeis very low, eventually, theso generally young people with a higher academic background are hired.

However, when I lived near Tokyo station for a while, I realized what the mistress said was true.

However, when I lived near Tokyo sStation for a while, I realized what the mistress said was true.

However, when I lived near Tokyo station for a while, I realized what the mistressbartender said was true.

Also, a friend who works for a regional government said the staff there can buy any expensive tea and coffee they want to drink by the office expense.

Also, a friend who works for a regional government said the staff there canould buy any expensive tea and coffee they wanted to drink by the office's expense.

Also, a friend who works for a regional government saidtold me that the staff there can buy any expensive tea and coffee they want to drink byat the office's expense.

According to an investigate, many of customers who go to brothels are public servants.

According to an investigateion, many of customers who go to brothels are public servants.

According to an investigate, many of customersion I read, many people who go to brothels are public servants.

I understand that not all public servants do such things but I think many do because they have much more money and time to waste than the workers in companies.

I understand that not all public servants do such things but I think many do because they have much more money and time to waste than the workers in companies.

Taiwan's digital minister is 39 years old.

Taiwan's digitaltechnology minister is 39 years old.

She made good applications for the coronavirus so Taiwan is not so bad situation.

She made good applications for the coronavirus so Taiwan is not soin such a bad situation.

She made good applicpreparations for the coronavirus so Taiwan is not soin such a bad situation.

On the other hand, Japanese minister in charge of IT is 79 years old.

On the other hand, the Japanese minister in charge of IT is 79 years old.

On the other hand, the Japanese minister in charge of ITtechnology is 79 years old.

I believe he does not know what IT stands for.

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