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It's my first diary.

Yoko 0 · March 6

Target Language - English

I write my first diary here.
It was warm today. I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.


Native Language - Japanese

初めての日記です。今日は暖かかったです。花粉症なので、洗濯物を外には干さず、コインランドリーで乾燥させました。

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masemune 0 March 6, 2021
It's my first diary.

It's mMy fFirst dDiary.

  • Correction Type:
  • Grammar
  • Stylistic
We use title case for titles.

While not necessarily incorrect, LC refers to diaries as Journals.

So you could also rewrite it to say: My First Journal
I write my first diary here.

I wriote my first diary here.

Wrote - 過去形
It was warm today.
I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.

I didn't dry the laundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.

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Welcome to LangCorrect Yokoさん! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more journals from you.

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Comment added on 03/06/2021

Correction 2 / 2
bhoke 0 March 6, 2021
It was warm today.