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Yoko

March 6, 2021

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It's my first diary.

I write my first diary here.
It was warm today. I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.


初めての日記です。今日は暖かかったです。花粉症なので、洗濯物を外には干さず、コインランドリーで乾燥させました。

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It was warm today.

It's mMy fFirst dDiary.

We use title case for titles.

While not necessarily incorrect, LC refers to diaries as Journals.

So you could also rewrite it to say: My First Journal

I wriote my first diary here.

Wrote - 過去形

It was warm today.

I didn't dry the laundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.

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Yoko

March 6, 2021

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Thank you for correcting my entry. That's very helpful!

It's my first diary.


It's mMy fFirst dDiary.

We use title case for titles. While not necessarily incorrect, LC refers to diaries as Journals. So you could also rewrite it to say: My First Journal

I write my first diary here.


I wriote my first diary here.

Wrote - 過去形

It was warm today.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.


I didn't dry the laundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.

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