March 6, 2021
It's my first diary.
I write my first diary here.
It was warm today. I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.
初めての日記です。今日は暖かかったです。花粉症なので、洗濯物を外には干さず、コインランドリーで乾燥させました。
It's mMy fFirst dDiary.
We use title case for titles.
While not necessarily incorrect, LC refers to diaries as Journals.
So you could also rewrite it to say: My First Journal
I wriote my first diary here.
Wrote - 過去形
It was warm today.
I didn't dry the laundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.
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March 6, 2021
Thank you for correcting my entry. That's very helpful!
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It's my first diary. It's We use title case for titles.
While not necessarily incorrect, LC refers to diaries as Journals. So you could also rewrite it to say: My First Journal |
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I write my first diary here. I wr Wrote - 過去形
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It was warm today. |
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I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever. I didn't dry the laundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever. |
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