Oct. 15, 2020
Introduce the game called 'among us' what playing for
This game's name called 'among us', it is a funny game and many people are playing the game, it usually has around 7 to 10 players joined and all of them in a space ship, all players will be separated into two groups, crewmates or impostors. The crewmates need to find out who is the impostor that is the game's purpose.crewmate can depend on any clues or their observation to win the game, but impostors can killing the crewmate, if the impostor and crewmate number of the survival is the same, the impostor will win the game. During the whole game, the crewmate can discuss with other crewmate but the impostor will also in the discussion, the imposters will explain for themselves or accusing other if some player is suspecting another is an impostor, to prevent losing the game. after the discussion crewmate can vote for a player if they considered the player is an imposter.
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I've seen this game mentioned on the internet before, but I haven't played it. The corrections are my best guess, so the nuance might be off or something.
Overall good job! For your next journal, try breaking up the long sentences into smaller ones. It will definitely help.
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Introduce the game called 'among us' what playing for Introduc |
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This game's name called 'among us', it is a funny game and many people are playing the game, it usually has around 7 to 10 players joined and all of them in a space ship, all players will be separated into two groups, crewmates or impostors.
You mentioned the name in the title so it's not necessary to repeat it. Also break up these sentences into smaller ones |
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The crewmates need to find out who is the impostor that is the game's purpose.crewmate can depend on any clues or their observation to win the game, but impostors can killing the crewmate, if the impostor and crewmate number of the survival is the same, the impostor will win the game. The |
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During the whole game, the crewmate can discuss with other crewmate but the impostor will also in the discussion, the imposters will explain for themselves or accusing other if some player is suspecting another is an impostor, to prevent losing the game. |
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after the discussion crewmate can vote for a player if they considered the player is an imposter.
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