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SummerTeaWater

April 8, 2022

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In a Bus Station

I am now waiting a bus to go home.

Unfortunately, I just missed a bus while I was waiting the cross signal.

For this reason, I should wait at least 20 minutes.

Many people are also going their home, some members are waiting in the bus station, too.

If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.

For my foot, I try to use a bus in a long time.

Please come the bus soon.

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In a Bus Station

I am now waiting for a bus to go home.

Unfortunately, I just missed a bus while I was waiting for/at the cross signal.

If the cross signal is a place you need "at" but if you were waiting for it you need "for"

For this reason, I shouldhave to wait at least 20 minutes.

Many people are also going their home, s. Some memberspeople are waiting in the bus station, too.

If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.

For my foot, I tryBecause of my injured foot, I have been trying to use a bus infor a long time.

Please comelet the bus come soon.

A more casual way of saying this would be "Please hurry up bus!"

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Good writing :) I know how frustrating it is waiting for the bus haha.

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SummerTeaWater

April 9, 2022

402

Thank you very much. It is frustated. :)

I am now waiting for a bus to gotake home.

For this reason, I shouldmust wait at least 20 minutes.

Many people are also going their home, some membershome. Some are waiting in the bus station, too.

If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.

ForBecause of my foot, I try to use awill need to take the bus infor a long time.

Sorry, I am not sure I understand your original sentence.

Please comelet the bus come soon.

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Good job. I hope your foot gets better quickly.

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SummerTeaWater

April 9, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

In a Bus Station

I am now waiting a bus to go home.

I am now waiting for a bus to gotake home.

I am now waiting for a bus to go home.

Unfortunately, I just missed a bus while I was waiting the cross signal.

Unfortunately, I just missed a bus while I was waiting for/at the cross signal.

For this reason, I should wait at least 20 minutes.

For this reason, I shouldhave to wait at least 20 minutes.

For this reason, I shouldmust wait at least 20 minutes.

Many people are also going their home, some members are waiting in the bus station, too.

Many people are also going their home, some membershome. Some are waiting in the bus station, too.

Many people are also going their home, s. Some memberspeople are waiting in the bus station, too.

If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.

If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.

If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.

For my foot, I try to use a bus in a long time.

ForBecause of my foot, I try to use awill need to take the bus infor a long time.

For my foot, I tryBecause of my injured foot, I have been trying to use a bus infor a long time.

Please come the bus soon.

Please comelet the bus come soon.

Please comelet the bus come soon.

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