Dec. 22, 2020
Immortality
Q. Would you like to be immortal, and why? If not, why not?
A. I don't want to be immortal because I believe I live my life with my full effort thanks to my limited time. If you don't have any deadline for your homework, you won't do it forever. People do something because they know life is limited time. Additionally, it will be painful to be immortal for ages. People live and die in about the same period, so people who live in the same ages share commonsense. However, if you live over 100years your value will be different from others in the era, and you will be mentally lonely. Ultimately, the earth is going to be swallowed by the sun in five billion years, so you should find a habitable zone in the universe until the limit. Otherwise, you drift into outer space without being able to die. It's more horrible rather than going to die.
Immortality
Would you like to be immortal, and why?
If not, why not?
A. I don't want to be immortal because I believe I live my life with my full effort thanks to my limited time.
If you don't have any deadline for your homework, you won't ever do it forever.
People do something because they know life is limited time.
Additionally, it will be painful to be immortal for ages.
People live and die in about the same period, so people who live in the same ages share commonsense values.
However, if you live over 100 years your values will be different from those of others in the era, and you will be mentallycome lonely.
I never heard "mentally lonely" before. I believe you could write: "...you will be unable to connect to others on an emotional level" or something similar.
Ultimately, the eEarth is going to be swallowed by the sSun in five billion years, so you should find a habitable zone in the universe until theat limit.
Otherwise, you will drift into outer space without being able to die.
It's more horrible rather than godying to die.
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Interesting text. I disagree that people only do things because they have a limited time though. If anything, having more time would mean more possibilities and we'd see people engaging in all sorts of creative projects since the fear of death would be absent. I know I would, at least.
Dec. 23, 2020
Thank you for your correction! Surely, your idea is also reasonable.
Immortality
Q.
Would you like to be immortal, and why?
If not, why not?
A. I don't want to be immortal because I believe that I live my life with my full efforto the fullest thanks to my limited time (on earth).
If you don't have any deadline for your homework, you won't do it forever’ll never do it.
People do somethings in life because they know liftime is limited time.
Additionally, it will be painful to be immortal for ages.
People live and die in about the same time period, so people who live in the same ages share commonsense moral values.
However, if you live over 100 years, your values will be different from others in the eraat time, and you will be alone mentally lonely.
Ultimately, the eEarth is going to be swallowed by the sun in five billion years, so you should find a habitable zone in the universe until the limitbefore that date.
Otherwise, you’ll drift into outer space without being able to die.
It's more horrible rathera lot worse than godying to die.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!!!
Dec. 23, 2020
Thank you so much!
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However, if you live over 100years your value will be different from others in the era, and you will be mentally lonely. However, if you live over 100 years your values will be different from those of others in the era, and you will be I never heard "mentally lonely" before. I believe you could write: "...you will be unable to connect to others on an emotional level" or something similar.
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Ultimately, the earth is going to be swallowed by the sun in five billion years, so you should find a habitable zone in the universe until the limit. Ultimately, the Ultimately, the |
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Otherwise, you drift into outer space without being able to die. Otherwise, you will drift into outer space without being able to die. Otherwise, you’ll drift into outer space without being able to die. |
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