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akihello

June 12, 2021

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I should think about my bucket list.

"What is at the top of your bucket list?"

What should I do? I'm not sure.

How about eating delicious food; Hmm, what food do I want to eat? And it doesn't seem to be the best.

How about going abroad; I'm not so much eager to do it.

That's a tough subject. I will calmly think about it for a while.


[ 自分の "bucket list" について、考えてみるのも良さそうだ。 ]


"死ぬまでにしたいことリストの第一位は何ですか?"

いったい、なんでしょう? 分からないです。

美味しいものを食べる、というのはどうだろう。ふうむ、どんなものが食べたいかしら。そして、これは一番というわけではなさそう。

海外に行ってみる、と、いうのは? うーん、これも、それほど特別やりたい、というわけでもないようです。


難しいテーマですね。しばらく、ゆっくり考えてみるのがいいかもしれません。

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Corrections

I should think about my bucket list.

"What is at the top of your bucket list?"

"

No space between quotation marks and ends of words.

What should I do?

I'm not sure.

How about eating delicious food;. Hmm, what food do I want to eat?

And it doesn't seem to be the best.

This is grammatically correct, but the meaning is unclear.

How about going abroad;? I'm not so muchless eager to do ithis.

Or "I'm less eager about this possibility."

That's a tough subject.

I will calmly think about it for a while.

Again, correct, but sounds odd. More natural: "I will definitely think about it for a while."

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akihello

June 13, 2021

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Thanks for the corrections. I appreciate.

I should think about my bucket list.


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"What is at the top of your bucket list?


"What is at the top of your bucket list?"

"


"

No space between quotation marks and ends of words.

What should I do?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm not sure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How about eating delicious food; Hmm, what food do I want to eat?


How about eating delicious food;. Hmm, what food do I want to eat?

And it doesn't seem to be the best.


And it doesn't seem to be the best.

This is grammatically correct, but the meaning is unclear.

How about going abroad; I'm not so much eager to do it.


How about going abroad;? I'm not so muchless eager to do ithis.

Or "I'm less eager about this possibility."

That's a tough subject.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will calmly think about it for a while.


I will calmly think about it for a while.

Again, correct, but sounds odd. More natural: "I will definitely think about it for a while."

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