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akihello

June 12, 2021

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I should think about my bucket list.

"What is at the top of your bucket list?"

What should I do? I'm not sure.

How about eating delicious food; Hmm, what food do I want to eat? And it doesn't seem to be the best.

How about going abroad; I'm not so much eager to do it.

That's a tough subject. I will calmly think about it for a while.


[ 自分の "bucket list" について、考えてみるのも良さそうだ。 ]


"死ぬまでにしたいことリストの第一位は何ですか?"

いったい、なんでしょう? 分からないです。

美味しいものを食べる、というのはどうだろう。ふうむ、どんなものが食べたいかしら。そして、これは一番というわけではなさそう。

海外に行ってみる、と、いうのは? うーん、これも、それほど特別やりたい、というわけでもないようです。


難しいテーマですね。しばらく、ゆっくり考えてみるのがいいかもしれません。

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Corrections

I should think about my bucket list.

"What is at the top of your bucket list?"

"

No space between quotation marks and ends of words.

What should I do?

I'm not sure.

How about eating delicious food;. Hmm, what food do I want to eat?

And it doesn't seem to be the best.

This is grammatically correct, but the meaning is unclear.

How about going abroad;? I'm not so muchless eager to do ithis.

Or "I'm less eager about this possibility."

That's a tough subject.

I will calmly think about it for a while.

Again, correct, but sounds odd. More natural: "I will definitely think about it for a while."

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akihello

June 13, 2021

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Thanks for the corrections. I appreciate.

I should think about my bucket list.

"What is at the top of your bucket list?

"What is at the top of your bucket list?"

"

"

What should I do?

I'm not sure.

How about eating delicious food; Hmm, what food do I want to eat?

How about eating delicious food;. Hmm, what food do I want to eat?

And it doesn't seem to be the best.

And it doesn't seem to be the best.

How about going abroad; I'm not so much eager to do it.

How about going abroad;? I'm not so muchless eager to do ithis.

That's a tough subject.

I will calmly think about it for a while.

I will calmly think about it for a while.

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