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joeeey

March 30, 2022

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I need your correction, please!

I want to be more reliable, especially to my parents and friends, which makes me continuely work hard.
As a medical student, I believe that I will become a doctor natually.
I often imagine the moment that my patients recover from their diseases with happiness.
As for me, I want to travel around the world to appreciate innumerable places of interest, so I have to make enough money to afford this. A reliable doctor will gain more reputation and there will be more people in need try to ask for your help, therefore, I can earn enough money for my traveling plan.

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I need your corrections, please!

I want to be more reliable, especially to my parents and friends, which makes meso I continueously work hard.

As a medical student, I naturally believe that I will become a doctor natually.

I often happily imagine the moment that my patients recover from their diseases with happiness.

As for meyself, I want to travel around the world to appreciatsee innumerable places of interest, so I have to make enough money to afford thissuch a trip.

A reliable doctor will gain morea good reputation, and there will be more people in need trying to ask for youtheir help, theref. If I become such a doctore, I can earn enough money for my traveling plans.

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joeeey

March 30, 2022

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Thank you for your detailed corrections!
It's really helpful!

I need your correction, please!

I need your corrections, please!

I want to be more reliable, especially to my parents and friends, which makes me continuely work hard.

I want to be more reliable, especially to my parents and friends, which makes meso I continueously work hard.

As a medical student, I believe that I will become a doctor natually.

As a medical student, I naturally believe that I will become a doctor natually.

I often imagine the moment that my patients recover from their diseases with happiness.

I often happily imagine the moment that my patients recover from their diseases with happiness.

As for me, I want to travel around the world to appreciate innumerable places of interest, so I have to make enough money to afford this.

As for meyself, I want to travel around the world to appreciatsee innumerable places of interest, so I have to make enough money to afford thissuch a trip.

A reliable doctor will gain more reputation and there will be more people in need try to ask for your help, therefore, I can earn enough money for my traveling plan.

A reliable doctor will gain morea good reputation, and there will be more people in need trying to ask for youtheir help, theref. If I become such a doctore, I can earn enough money for my traveling plans.

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