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I want to be more reliable, especially to my parents and friends, which makes meso I continueously work hard. I want to be more reliable, especially to my parents and friends, so I continuously work hard.

As a medical student, I naturally believe that I will become a doctor natually. As a medical student, I naturally believe that I will become a doctor.

I often happily imagine the moment that my patients recover from their diseases with happiness. I often happily imagine the moment that my patients recover from their diseases.

As for meyself, I want to travel around the world to appreciatsee innumerable places of interest, so I have to make enough money to afford thissuch a trip. As for myself, I want to travel around the world to see innumerable places of interest, so I have to make enough money to afford such a trip.

A reliable doctor will gain morea good reputation, and there will be more people in need trying to ask for youtheir help, theref. If I become such a doctore, I can earn enough money for my traveling plans. A reliable doctor will gain a good reputation, and there will be more people in need trying to ask for their help. If I become such a doctor, I can earn enough money for my travels.