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saoriiii

May 14

English

1 min read

I love "THE CREW2"

I like playing video game.
But I take time to study English now, so I can't play long time.
I play "THE CREW2" in a little time.
It is race game that can run by many kinds of cars in USA.
UBI software company launched it.
I love "THE CREW2",but it has passed several yeas since it was launched.
l think that is quite a few player in Japan.
My friend said a joke "You are only player in Japan,aren't you?
However, as usual I play it yet.

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I like playing video game.

I like playing video game.s,

I like playing video games, but I am studying English now, so I can't play for a long time.

But I take time to study English now, so I can't play long time.

Bbut I takehave to spend time ton studying English nowadays, so I can't play long timemuch.

But I take time to study English now, so I can't play long time.

I play "THE CREW2" in a little time.

I played "THE CREW2" in a little timefor (a short time / a bit).

I play "THE CREW2" inhe Crew 2" for just a little time.

It is race game that can run by many kinds of cars in USA.

It is racean American racing game that can run byhas many kinds of cars in USA.

It is raceing game that can run byin which you can drive many kinds of cars in the USA.

UBI software company launched it.

It was launched by UBI software company launched it.

This may be more natural. The original sentence was grammatically correct, however.

UBI software company launched iIt was published (made) by Ubisoft.

I love "THE CREW2",but it has passed several yeas since it was launched.

I love "THE CREW2", but it has passed several yeasseveral years have passed since it was launched.

I love "THE CREWhe Crew 2",but it has passedbeen several years since it was launchedcame out.

l think that is quite a few player in Japan.

l think that is quiteere are (not many / only a few) players in Japan.

l think that is quitethere are only a few players in Japan.

Reading the next sentence, I think you mean to say that there are not a lot of players in Japan, correct?

My friend said a joke "You are only player in Japan,aren't you?

My friend (said as a joke / joked) "You are the only player in Japan, aren't you?"

My friend said as a joke, "You are the only player in Japan, aren't you?

However, as usual I play it yet.

However, as usual II will play it yetas usual.

However, as usual II continue to play it yetas usual.

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