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June 30, 2021

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I like autumn.

"What is your favorite season?"

I like autumn.
The image of spring is good, such as to begin growing up plants, to start new school years. However, I feel still cold in spring most of time.
I'm not good with the very hot season nor bitterly cold season.
So, the autumn is better than those seasons.
There are several phrases related to autumn in Japan: 食欲の秋, 芸術の秋, 読書の秋…
The autumn seems a good season to eat delicious food, to make attracting art, to learn reading books, in Japan.
( I like comfy sleeping in spring as well, though. )

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I like autumn.

"What is your favorite season?

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I like autumn.

The image of sSpring is a good, such as toeason, where plants begin to growing up plants, to start new school year and the new school year starts among other things.

"grow up" and "start" need to be intransitive here (basically there is no object for the verb, cf. 生える and 始まる in JP I believe), so "plants" and "new school year" have to be the subject.

However, I feel stilstill feel cold in spring most of the time.

The complete phrase is "most of the time" and "still" tends to go before the verb.

I'm not good with the very hot season nor bitterly cold season.

So, the autumn is better than those seasons.

There are several phrases related to autumn in Japan: 食欲の秋, 芸術の秋, 読書の秋…

TheIn Japan, autumn seems like a good season to eat delicious food, to make attractingve art, to learn and to reading books, in Japan.

Don't need a definite article for seasons. The complete phrase is "seem like". "Attractive" is the adjective form of "to attract" and I think 読書 is best translated as "reading". Also, it's best to put prepositional phrases like "in Japan" at the start of the sentences, especially if they're the emphasis.

( I like comfy sleeping in spring as well, though. )

I like autumn.

"What is your favorite season?

"

I like autumn.

The image of spring is good, such as to begin growing up plants, to start new school years.

The image of sSpring is a good, such as toeason, where plants begin to growing up plants, to start new school year and the new school year starts among other things.

However, I feel still cold in spring most of time.

However, I feel stilstill feel cold in spring most of the time.

I'm not good with the very hot season nor bitterly cold season.

So, the autumn is better than those seasons.

There are several phrases related to autumn in Japan: 食欲の秋, 芸術の秋, 読書の秋…

The autumn seems a good season to eat delicious food, to make attracting art, to learn reading books, in Japan.

TheIn Japan, autumn seems like a good season to eat delicious food, to make attractingve art, to learn and to reading books, in Japan.

( I like comfy sleeping in spring as well, though. )

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