Aug. 8, 2021
I felt sick today
A week before, I had a cold. It wasn't a heavy one, but ,given the current situation, I was very concerned. I took a test and, luckly, I hadn't COVID. That time was the first time I felt sick in the whole year, so wasn't a great time for me.
Today I went out looking for a new pairs of shoes. When I returned I had a heavy headache. To be honest, I'm still in pain. I hope this is nothing.
I felt sick today
A week before,ago I had a cold.
Normally when discussing past events, the word "before" will be used relative to another event (or it will be clear from the context what the event is). For example:
"I didn't play well in my football match. I became ill the day before."
"I only enjoyed the last week of my vacation. Before that, I had terrible food poisoning."
It wasn't a heavysevere one, but ,given the current situation, I was very concerned.
Any English speaker will understand what is meant by "heavy" but a better choice of word is "severe" or "bad"
I took a test and, luckily, I hadidn't have COVID.
That time was the first time I felt sick in the whole year, so wasn't a great time for me.
Today I went out looking for a new pairs of shoes.
When I returned I had a heavy headache.
To be honest, I'm still in pain.
I hope this is nothing.
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Good effort, English can be a fickle language. Keep it up!
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I felt sick today |
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A week before, I had a cold. A week Normally when discussing past events, the word "before" will be used relative to another event (or it will be clear from the context what the event is). For example:
"I didn't play well in my football match. I became ill the day before." "I only enjoyed the last week of my vacation. Before that, I had terrible food poisoning." |
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It wasn't a heavy one, but ,given the current situation, I was very concerned. It wasn't a Any English speaker will understand what is meant by "heavy" but a better choice of word is "severe" or "bad"
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I took a test and, luckly, I hadn't COVID. I took a test and |
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That time was the first time I felt sick in the whole year, so wasn't a great time for me. |
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Today I went out looking for a new pairs of shoes. |
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When I returned I had a heavy headache. |
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To be honest, I'm still in pain. |
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I hope this is nothing. |
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