July 25, 2022
Hypothetical stay-cation
I wish to spend the last of summer in Korea but I can't go anytime soon. So hypothetically, I'd plan to spend a week in Seoul. I'd book a hotel room in a neighborhood a bit far from the city center so I'd be able to walk there (I enjoy taking walks and just sightseeing outside of a vehicle). I'd try to visit as many tourist attractions as possible and a few cafes.
Hypothetical stay-cation
A "staycation" is a vacation spent at home or nearby. What you are hypothetically planning doesn't sound like that, so I believe your title is misleading.
I wishould like to spend the last (part) of summer in Korea but I can't go anytime soon.
So hypothetically, I'd plan to spend a week in Seoul.
I'd book a hotel room in a neighborhood a bit farway from the city center so I'd be able to walk there (I enjoy taking walks and just sightseeing outside of a vehicle).
"A bit far" is not incorrect, but it sounds a little funny to me.
I'd try to visit as many tourist attractions as possible and a few cafes.
Hypothetical sStay-cCation
We usually capitalize the first letter of important words in a title.
I wishant to spend the last week of summer in Korea but I can't go anytime soon.
This sounds more natural in the US.
So hypothetically, I'd plan to spend a week in Seoul.
I'd book a hotel room in a neighborhood a bit farsome distance away from the city center so I'd be able to walk there. (I enjoy taking walks and just sightseeing outside of a vehiclesightseeing while taking walks).
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I'd book a hotel room in a neighborhood some distance away from the city center so I'd be able to walk there. (I enjoy sightseeing while taking walks instead of sightseeing from within a car).
I'd try to visit as many tourist attractions as possible and a few cafes.
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Terrific job!
Hypothetical stay-cation
So hypothetically, I'd plan to spend a week in Seoul.
I'd book a hotel room in a neighborhood a bit far from the city center so I'd be able to walk there. (I enjoy taking walks and just sightseeing outside of a vehicle).
I'd try to visit as many tourist attractions as possible and a few cafes.
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Nice work. I didn't notice any mistakes :)
I wishant to spend the last part of summer in Korea, but I can't go anytime soon.
So hypothetically, I'if I was able to, I would plan to spend a week in Seoul.
I'd try to visit as many tourist attractions as possible, and also a few cafes.
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