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leksanrel

June 3, 2021

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How would your friends and family describe you?

I really don't know.

Sometimes they call me "Sunny" because I'm very soft person and try to stay positive in every situation. But I also know that my friends and family have seen my depressive side and they have supported me on my way to becoming a human again. That's why I think that their opinion is more realistic than just "Sunny".

Also I was straight-A student at school. Maybe they think that I'm smart? However, at the University my grades dropped and my knowledge remained solid only in interesting areas of science.

This is a really difficult question to me.

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How would your friends and family describe you?

I really don't know.

Sometimes they call me "Sunny" because I'm a very soft person and try to stay positive in every situation.

You need an article in front of a noun.

But I also know that my friends and family have seen my depressived side and they have supported me on my way to becoming a human again.

That's why I think that their opinion is more realistic than just "Sunny".

Also I was a straight-A student at school.

Maybe they think that I'm smart?

However, at the Uuniversity my grades dropped and my knowledge remained solid only in interesting areas of science.

You wouldn't capitalize "university" unless it's after a specific name, such as "Cornell University" or "Shanghai University". If you're talking about university in general, it's common to simply say "at university" or "in college".

To me, this is a really difficult question to me.

You generally specific the subject (ex: yourself) at the beginning of a sentence.

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Great job!

I really don't know.

Sometimes they call me "Sunny" because I'm very soft person and try to stay positive in every situation.

Sometimes they call me "Sunny" because I'm a very soft person and try to stay positive in every situation.

How would your friends and family describe you?

But I also know that my friends and family have seen my depressive side and they have supported me on my way to becoming a human again.

But I also know that my friends and family have seen my depressived side and they have supported me on my way to becoming a human again.

That's why I think that their opinion is more realistic than just "Sunny".

Also I was straight-A student at school.

Also I was a straight-A student at school.

Maybe they think that I'm smart?

However, at the University my grades dropped and my knowledge remained solid only in interesting areas of science.

However, at the Uuniversity my grades dropped and my knowledge remained solid only in interesting areas of science.

This is a really difficult question to me.

To me, this is a really difficult question to me.

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