Nov. 22, 2020
How online shopping growth has improved our lives
Online shopping has evolved through last years. What before was something difficult to manage and people didn’t really think it was possible, has become essential and hard to imagine what would life be like if it didn’t exist nowadays. And within its changes, there also have appeared various benefits for society.
It is one of the easiest things we can do. You look for something, click the first link you’re shown, add it to your cart, then proceed the order and that’s it, your package will be on its way to your home in a few days. It is even easier than changing a tire or repairing a plumb! Though, is it better than traditional shopping?
One of the main advantages of online shopping is saving time. Whereas you would enter a store, search where is the product you want – or if they even have it – pick it up and join the long queue to pay in the cashier, you can just Google it, choose the best deal and forget about everything else. That also involves the fact that, most of the time, on the internet there are more and better prices, deals or promotions than in traditional shops. Lastly, the big game changer: you don’t even have to leave your home! You can just wait for it to come sitting in your sofa with a cup of hot chocolate.
Online shopping has changed our lives for good, and it is a matter of time for traditional shops to extinguish.
How online shopping growth has improved our lives
Online shopping has evolved through lastthe years.
"through the years" is a common English expression and sounds natural here!
What before was something difficult to manage and people didn’t really think it was seemed impossible, has become essential and. It is hard to imagine what would life be like if it didn’t exist nowadays.
This is much easier to read as two sentences
And within its changes, there also have appeared various benefits for society.
It is one of the easiest things we can do.
You look for something, click the first link you’re shown, add it to your cart, then proceed with the order and that’s it, your package will be on its way to your home in a few days.
Just added "with"
It is even easier than changing a tire or repairing a plumb!
I've never heard of a plumb, I don't think it's the word you mean?
Though, is it better than traditional shopping?
One of the main advantages of online shopping is saving time.
Whereas shopping in person you would enter a store, search where isfor the product you want – or if they even have it – pick it up and join the long queue to pay in the cashier, online you can just Google it, choose the best deal and forget about everything else.
The "whereas" grammar doesn't make sense unless you name the things you're comparing here, so I added "in person" and "online", but this sentence is still a little complicated
That also involves the fact that, most of the time, on the internet there are more and better prices, deals or promotions than in traditional shops.
Lastly, the big game changer: you don’t even have to leave your home!
You can just wait for it to come sitting ion your sofa with a cup of hot chocolate.
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Online shopping has changed our lives for good, and it is a matter of time for traditional shops to extinguish.
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Really good! The more complex sentences sound a bit awkward, but I had no trouble understanding what you're saying
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Online shopping has evolved through last years. Online shopping has evolved through "through the years" is a common English expression and sounds natural here!
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What before was something difficult to manage and people didn’t really think it was possible, has become essential and hard to imagine what would life be like if it didn’t exist nowadays. What before was This is much easier to read as two sentences
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And within its changes, there also have appeared various benefits for society. |
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It is one of the easiest things we can do. |
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You look for something, click the first link you’re shown, add it to your cart, then proceed the order and that’s it, your package will be on its way to your home in a few days. You look for something, click the first link you’re shown, add it to your cart, then proceed with the order and that’s it, your package will be on its way to your home in a few days. Just added "with"
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It is even easier than changing a tire or repairing a plumb! It is even easier than changing a tire or repairing a plumb! I've never heard of a plumb, I don't think it's the word you mean?
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Though, is it better than traditional shopping? |
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One of the main advantages of online shopping is saving time. |
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Whereas you would enter a store, search where is the product you want – or if they even have it – pick it up and join the long queue to pay in the cashier, you can just Google it, choose the best deal and forget about everything else. Whereas shopping in person you would enter a store, search The "whereas" grammar doesn't make sense unless you name the things you're comparing here, so I added "in person" and "online", but this sentence is still a little complicated
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That also involves the fact that, most of the time, on the internet there are more and better prices, deals or promotions than in traditional shops. |
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Lastly, the big game changer: you don’t even have to leave your home! |
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You can just wait for it to come sitting in your sofa with a cup of hot chocolate. You can just wait for it to come sitting In -> on
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Online shopping has changed our lives for good, and it is a matter of time for traditional shops to extinguish. |
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