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brytcelf

Jun 17

English

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Hot weather

Today is finally Friday.
All this week, it was so hot. In some cities in my country, we had 40 grades Celsius but in the news said that next week we will be better, with cooler weather. I hope it will be because I don't like the heat. I can't think correctly and I can't concentrate on my studies. Anyways, everyday I study, I exercise and I do everything I need to do.

I feel like a zombie.

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Today is finally Friday.

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All this week, it was so hot.

In some cities in my country, we had 40 grades Celsius but in the news said that next week we will be better, with cooler weather.

In some cities in my country, we had 40 grad it was 40 degrees Celsius but in the news they said that next week weit will be better, with cooler weather.

Usage Stylistic

In some cities in my country, we had 40 graddays where it was 40 degrees Celsius, but in the news said that next week we will be better, with cooler weather.

Stylistic

In some cities in my country, we had 40 gradit was 40 degrees Celsius but in the news said that next week weit will be better, with cooler weather.

En inglés decimos "it is 40 degrees".
Usage Stylistic

In some cities in my country, we had 40 gradit reached 40 degrees Celsius, but in the news said that next week we will be better, with cooler weather.

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I hope it will be because I don't like the heat.

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I can't think correctly and I can't concentrate on my studies.

Anyways, everyday I study, I exercise and I do everything I need to do.

Anyways, everyday I study, I exercise and I do everything I need to do.

In some dialects of English, people will sometimes say “anyways” instead of “anyway” as a colloquialism in casual conversation, but “anyway” is the correct form for standard written a English.
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Anyways, everyday I study, I exercise and I do everything I need to do.

Stylistic

Anyways, everydayRegardless, I study, I exercise and I do everything I need to do everyday.

Grammar Usage

Anyways, every day I study, I exercise, and I do everything I need to do.

"Everyday" as one word is an adjective that describes daily or normal things, e.g. "It's a part of everyday life."
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I feel like a zombie.

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