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Dec. 10, 2020

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I planted green onion on my balcony about two weeks ago. It looked they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow during the cold weather, so I gave up watering them. But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that I planted green onion seeds, I noticed that some buds spouted. It took more than two weeks to germinate. I was happy to see it! But my dad said that his green onion has withered in his patch, and it was too late to plant. I understand that it's hard to grow plants during winter, but I'll water them and wait and see.


約2週間前にベランダでネギを植えました。 全く芽が出てくる気配がなく、寒い時期は育ちにくいと言われたこともあり、水やりをやめました。 でも昨日の朝、ねぎの種を植えた容器を見ると、発芽しているのに気づきました。 発芽するのに2週間以上かかりました。 嬉しかったです! しかし、私の父の畑のネギは枯れた、植えるには遅すぎたと言っていました。 冬は植物を育てるのが難しいとは思いますが、水をやり、見守っていきたいと思います。

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I planted green onions on my balcony about two weeks ago.

It looked like they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow them during the cold wseatherson, so I gave up on watering them.

Another way to say it would be "people said that they're hard to grow".

But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that Iin which I had planted the green onion seeds, and I noticed that some buds had sprouted.

ItThey took more than two weeks to germinate.

You could also say "it took more than two weeks for them to germinate".

I was happy to see it!

But my dad said that histhe green onion has withered in his patchin his patch had withered, and it was too late to plant.

I understand that it's hard to grow plants during winter, but I'll water them and wait and see.

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Well written! I get your struggle, growing plants in the winter is definitely a challenge. I love gardening too and I've got a lot of plants in my house, so I understand. So good luck with growing your onions. :) Just try not to overwater them, as they don't need as much water in the winter. Because of the cold weather the soil doesn't dry as quickly, so too much moisture can cause the plant to rot from underneath and eventually wither.

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thinkmore

Dec. 10, 2020

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Thank you for the corrections and the comment! That's cool. Yes, I'll be careful not to water too much. I've developed a interest in gardening recently. I hope to have a lot of flowers and plants on my balcony eventually.

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I planted green onions on my balcony about two weeks ago.

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It looked they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow during thethem in cold weather, so I gave up on watering them.

But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that Iwhere I had planted the green onion seeds, and I noticed that some buds had sprouted.

It took more than two weeks to germinate.

I was happy to see it!

But my dad said that his green onion has withered in his patch, and it was too late to plant. (a new one?)

This sentence is a little confusing to me. Could you explain it a little more?

I understand that it's hard to grow plants during winter, but I'll water them and wait and see.

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Good job! I hope your plants do well :)

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Dec. 10, 2020

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Thank you for the corrections! My dad has his own patch, and had grown green onions. He gave me the seeds, and I planted them on my balcony. I mean we both were too late to plant the seeds. We should've planted them in warmer season.

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I planted green onion on my balcony about two weeks ago.

I planted green onions on my balcony about two weeks ago.

I planted green onions on my balcony about two weeks ago.

It looked they hadn't grown at all, and I was said that it's hard to grow during the cold weather, so I gave up watering them.

But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that I planted green onion seeds, I noticed that some buds spouted.

But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that Iwhere I had planted the green onion seeds, and I noticed that some buds had sprouted.

But yesterday morning, I looked at the containers that Iin which I had planted the green onion seeds, and I noticed that some buds had sprouted.

It took more than two weeks to germinate.

ItThey took more than two weeks to germinate.

I was happy to see it!

But my dad said that his green onion has withered in his patch, it was too late to plant.

I understand that it's hard to grow plants during winter, but I'll water them and wait and see.

It looked they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow during the cold weather, so I gave up watering them.

It looked they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow during thethem in cold weather, so I gave up on watering them.

It looked like they hadn't grown at all, and people said that it's hard to grow them during the cold wseatherson, so I gave up on watering them.

But my dad said that his green onion has withered in his patch, and it was too late to plant.

But my dad said that his green onion has withered in his patch, and it was too late to plant. (a new one?)

But my dad said that histhe green onion has withered in his patchin his patch had withered, and it was too late to plant.

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