Aug. 14, 2021
Heavy Rain
All over Japan, it's pouring intensely. Almost whole the county is being covered with nimbus, and heavy rain warnings have been issued. Fortunately, the situation where I am isn't so bad.
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Heavy Rain
All over Japan, it's pouring intensely.
Almost the whole the county is being covered with nimbus clouds, and heavy rain warnings have been issued.
Almost the whole county is being covered with nimbus clouds, and heavy rain warnings have been issued.
Just checking - do you mean "county" or "country"?
Also, I think it sounds a little better saying "nimbus clouds", but that might just be personal preference.
Nice use of the passive voice - "have been issued".
Fortunately, the situation where I am isn't so bad.
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It's been raining really heavily here too recently. A lot of the railway tracks have been flooded and trains have been cancelled.
If you're interested, I'd like to introduce you to another good phrase: "It's chucking it down". This means the same as "it's raining really heavily", but it's a bit more casual.
Also, have you heard the phrase, "It's raining cats and dogs"? It's a bit silly, but it means the same!
Aug. 15, 2021
Thank you for introducing the phrases, and the second one is funny.
Let us both be careful of heavy rain!
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All over Japan, it's pouring intensely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Almost whole the county is being covered with nimbus, and heavy rain warnings have been issued.
Almost the whol Just checking - do you mean "county" or "country"? Also, I think it sounds a little better saying "nimbus clouds", but that might just be personal preference. Nice use of the passive voice - "have been issued". |
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Fortunately, the situation where I am isn't so bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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