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Nov. 4, 2020

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Global warming

Today all of us aware of climate change, since everybody faces with unusual phenomena of the weather. Somewhere we observe unusual frost, somewhere – non-typical warming, somewhere – unexpected storms, cyclones and floods. It seems the weather goes mad? Also, we receive sadly news of glacial melt in Antarctica and Arctic, what cause the rise of sea-level which in turn threaten human habitation. And we can already see realization of the worst scenario in sinking islands of Pacific Ocean.
Everybody worries and asks themselves – why all these things happen? Scientists say the reason of all these events is global warming because of greenhouse effect caused by human activity. But not all scientists agree with those who accuse only humanity in climate change. Some of them found contradictions in that theory and pointed out other reasons for climate change, so they deny completely or partially the men’s role in this event. Some scientists even say we will have global cooling soon but not global warming and people are not responsible for that.
So what is the truth? Without a doubt, we produce many wastes that first of all are harmful for ourselves, but could they be enough to make shifts in Earth atmosphere? Let us assume it is so. At least it will give us a hope of our ability to influence climate. Anyway, we must do something for our environment and ecology. For this, we should modify our technologies to reduce emissions in atmosphere. And this process already goes. We can see a growth of green energy, electric car developments, restrictions in ecology regulations and attempts to clean up the environment. All of that help to believe climate will be saved by governments and companies.

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Global wWarming

In English, all the nouns, verbs, and adjetives in the title are capitalized.

Today all of us are aware of climate change, since everybody is facesd with the unusual phenomena relating tof the weather.

Somewhere wIn different places we're observeing unusual frost, somewhere – non-typical warming, somewhere – unexpected storms, cyclones, and floods.

It seems that the weather goes mad?!

"?" shows a question.
"!" shows strong emotion.

Also, we sadly receive sadlyd the news of glacial melt in the Antarctica and Arctic, whatich cause the rise of sea-levels, which in turn threaten human habitation.

And we can already see realization of theis worst scenario in the sinking of islands ofin Pacific Ocean.

Everybody worries and asks themselves – why, "Why are all these things happening"?

Scientists say the reason of all these events is global warming because of, which is created through the greenhouse effect caused by human activity.

But not all scientists agree with those who accuse only humanity in climate change.

Some of them found contradictions in that theory and pointed out other reasons for climate change, so they deny completely or partially the men’either deny partially or completely mankind's role in this event.

Some scientists even say we will have global cooling soon but notinstead of global warming and that people are not responsible for that.

"are not" is commonly written as "aren't".

So whatich is the truth?

"what is" can become "what's".

Without a doubt, we produce manya lot of wastes that first of all are harmful forto ourselves first and foremost, but could they be enough to make these shifts in Earth's atmosphere?

Let u's assume it is so.

At least it will give us athe hope of our ability to influence climate.

Anyway, we must do something for our environment and ecology.

ForDo to this, we should modify our technologies to reduce emissions in atmosphere.

And this process is already goesoccurring.

We canare seeing a growth ofin green energy, electric car developments, restrictions in ecology regulations, and attempts to clean up the environment.

All of that helps me (?) to believe that climate will be saved by our governments and companies.

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Global warming

Global wWarming

Today all of us aware of climate change, since everybody faces with unusual phenomena of the weather.

Today all of us are aware of climate change, since everybody is facesd with the unusual phenomena relating tof the weather.

Somewhere we observe unusual frost, somewhere – non-typical warming, somewhere – unexpected storms, cyclones and floods.

Somewhere wIn different places we're observeing unusual frost, somewhere – non-typical warming, somewhere – unexpected storms, cyclones, and floods.

It seems the weather goes mad?

It seems that the weather goes mad?!

Also, we receive sadly news of glacial melt in Antarctica and Arctic, what cause the rise of sea-level which in turn threaten human habitation.

Also, we sadly receive sadlyd the news of glacial melt in the Antarctica and Arctic, whatich cause the rise of sea-levels, which in turn threaten human habitation.

And we can already see realization of the worst scenario in sinking islands of Pacific Ocean.

And we can already see realization of theis worst scenario in the sinking of islands ofin Pacific Ocean.

Everybody worries and asks themselves – why all these things happen?

Everybody worries and asks themselves – why, "Why are all these things happening"?

Scientists say the reason of all these events is global warming because of greenhouse effect caused by human activity.

Scientists say the reason of all these events is global warming because of, which is created through the greenhouse effect caused by human activity.

But not all scientists agree with those who accuse only humanity in climate change.

Some of them found contradictions in that theory and pointed out other reasons for climate change, so they deny completely or partially the men’s role in this event.

Some of them found contradictions in that theory and pointed out other reasons for climate change, so they deny completely or partially the men’either deny partially or completely mankind's role in this event.

Some scientists even say we will have global cooling soon but not global warming and people are not responsible for that.

Some scientists even say we will have global cooling soon but notinstead of global warming and that people are not responsible for that.

So what is the truth?

So whatich is the truth?

Without a doubt, we produce many wastes that first of all are harmful for ourselves, but could they be enough to make shifts in Earth atmosphere?

Without a doubt, we produce manya lot of wastes that first of all are harmful forto ourselves first and foremost, but could they be enough to make these shifts in Earth's atmosphere?

Let us assume it is so.

Let u's assume it is so.

At least it will give us a hope of our ability to influence climate.

At least it will give us athe hope of our ability to influence climate.

Anyway, we must do something for our environment and ecology.

For this, we should modify our technologies to reduce emissions in atmosphere.

ForDo to this, we should modify our technologies to reduce emissions in atmosphere.

And this process already goes.

And this process is already goesoccurring.

We can see a growth of green energy, electric car developments, restrictions in ecology regulations and attempts to clean up the environment.

We canare seeing a growth ofin green energy, electric car developments, restrictions in ecology regulations, and attempts to clean up the environment.

All of that help to believe climate will be saved by governments and companies.

All of that helps me (?) to believe that climate will be saved by our governments and companies.

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