Jan. 14, 2022
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week. Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English. The book is about English grammar and writing. I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar. I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself. The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor. So thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping us. This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to them.
Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.
Though English is my second language and, I've been learnstudying it for a few years by myself, and I enjoy reading books in English.
I would be careful of using multiple clauses. You have 3 clauses here, which are "Though English is my second language" "I've been studying it for a few years by myself" and "I enjoy reading books in English" The last two clauses don't really work with "though" in the beginning of the sentence.
The book is about English grammar and writing.
I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.
Generally, it's already a good sentence. But I would combine the previous sentence to give the writing more complexity to make
"The book is about English grammar and writing, and I hope that it would help me improve.
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm tryingit's very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.
"to be honest" doesn't make sense with "I'm trying very hard" since it makes it sound like you trying hard is a bad thing.
The only source that I find peopleof feedback to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or to have a tutor.
So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping usme.
Up until this point, you've mentioned only yourself, so keep your writing consistent by using me instead of us.
This year, I decided to improve my written Englishing and vocabulary in English by reading books related to them.
The phrase "written English" is sometimes used, but it's not very common.
Feedback
Generally, your English is already good! Your grammar has small errors, but it seems you have a good grasp on it. I would be careful with the content and composition of your writing. You communicate the general idea well, but some conjunctions or phrases don't match with the tone of the content.
Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read it this week.
just some stylistic feedback
Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.
Just some stylistic feedback
The book is about English grammar and writing.
I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.
The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor.
So thanks to everyone ion this beneficial platform for helping us.
This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to themon these subjects.
Good work.
Feedback
Great job and good luck with your English-learning journey!
Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing |
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week. Today, I Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read just some stylistic feedback
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Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English. Though English is my second language I would be careful of using multiple clauses. You have 3 clauses here, which are "Though English is my second language" "I've been studying it for a few years by myself" and "I enjoy reading books in English" The last two clauses don't really work with "though" in the beginning of the sentence.
Just some stylistic feedback
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The book is about English grammar and writing. |
I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar. I hope that it helps me Generally, it's already a good sentence. But I would combine the previous sentence to give the writing more complexity to make
"The book is about English grammar and writing, and I hope that it would help me improve. |
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself. I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, "to be honest" doesn't make sense with "I'm trying very hard" since it makes it sound like you trying hard is a bad thing.
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The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor. The only source |
So thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping us. So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping Up until this point, you've mentioned only yourself, so keep your writing consistent by using me instead of us.
So thanks to everyone |
This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to them. This year, I decided to improve my writ The phrase "written English" is sometimes used, but it's not very common.
This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books Good work.
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