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hsen2012

Jan. 14, 2022

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Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing

Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week. Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English. The book is about English grammar and writing. I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar. I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself. The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor. So thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping us. This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to them.

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Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing

Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.

Though English is my second language and, I've been learnstudying it for a few years by myself, and I enjoy reading books in English.

I would be careful of using multiple clauses. You have 3 clauses here, which are "Though English is my second language" "I've been studying it for a few years by myself" and "I enjoy reading books in English" The last two clauses don't really work with "though" in the beginning of the sentence.

The book is about English grammar and writing.

I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.

Generally, it's already a good sentence. But I would combine the previous sentence to give the writing more complexity to make
"The book is about English grammar and writing, and I hope that it would help me improve.

I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm tryingit's very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.

"to be honest" doesn't make sense with "I'm trying very hard" since it makes it sound like you trying hard is a bad thing.

The only source that I find peopleof feedback to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or to have a tutor.

So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping usme.

Up until this point, you've mentioned only yourself, so keep your writing consistent by using me instead of us.

This year, I decided to improve my written Englishing and vocabulary in English by reading books related to them.

The phrase "written English" is sometimes used, but it's not very common.

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Generally, your English is already good! Your grammar has small errors, but it seems you have a good grasp on it. I would be careful with the content and composition of your writing. You communicate the general idea well, but some conjunctions or phrases don't match with the tone of the content.

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hsen2012

Jan. 15, 2022

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Thanks!

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hsen2012

Jan. 15, 2022

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Thanks!

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hsen2012

Jan. 15, 2022

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Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.

Why I can't use have?

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ruu

Jan. 15, 2022

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It's not wrong grammatically. You could keep it there, and but using "have finished" adds a certain nuance about when you finished reading or about an expectation that you should be finished, and in context to the whole sentence, it doesn't seem needed. I haven't formally studied English, so sorry if I can't explain it better!

Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing

Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read it this week.

just some stylistic feedback

Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.

Just some stylistic feedback

The book is about English grammar and writing.

I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.

I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.

The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor.

So thanks to everyone ion this beneficial platform for helping us.

This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to themon these subjects.

Good work.

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Great job and good luck with your English-learning journey!

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hsen2012

Jan. 15, 2022

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Thanks for your help!

Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing

Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.

Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.

Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read it this week.

Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.

Though English is my second language and, I've been learnstudying it for a few years by myself, and I enjoy reading books in English.

Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.

The book is about English grammar and writing.

I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.

I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.

I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.

I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm tryingit's very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.

The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor.

The only source that I find peopleof feedback to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or to have a tutor.

So thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping us.

So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping usme.

So thanks to everyone ion this beneficial platform for helping us.

This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to them.

This year, I decided to improve my written Englishing and vocabulary in English by reading books related to them.

This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to themon these subjects.

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