Jan. 14, 2022
Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week. Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English. The book is about English grammar and writing. I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar. I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself. The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor. So thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping us. This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to them.
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Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read it this week.
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read this week.
just some stylistic feedback
Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.
English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.
Just some stylistic feedback
The book is about English grammar and writing.
I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.
The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor.
So thanks to everyone ion this beneficial platform for helping us.
So thanks to everyone on this beneficial platform for helping us.
This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to themon these subjects.
This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books on these subjects.
Good work.
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Great job and good luck with your English-learning journey!
Jan. 15, 2022
Thanks for your help!
Getting Another Book To Improve My Writing
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.
Today, I finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read this week.
Though English is my second language and, I've been learnstudying it for a few years by myself, and I enjoy reading books in English.
Though English is my second language, I've been studying it for a few years by myself, and I enjoy reading books in English.
I would be careful of using multiple clauses. You have 3 clauses here, which are "Though English is my second language" "I've been studying it for a few years by myself" and "I enjoy reading books in English" The last two clauses don't really work with "though" in the beginning of the sentence.
The book is about English grammar and writing.
I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.
I hope that it helps me improve my English writing and grammar.
Generally, it's already a good sentence. But I would combine the previous sentence to give the writing more complexity to make
"The book is about English grammar and writing, and I hope that it would help me improve.
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm tryingit's very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, it's very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.
"to be honest" doesn't make sense with "I'm trying very hard" since it makes it sound like you trying hard is a bad thing.
The only source that I find peopleof feedback to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or to have a tutor.
The only source of feedback to help me improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or to have a tutor.
So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping usme.
So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping me.
Up until this point, you've mentioned only yourself, so keep your writing consistent by using me instead of us.
This year, I decided to improve my written Englishing and vocabulary in English by reading books related to them.
This year, I decided to improve my writing and vocabulary in English by reading books.
The phrase "written English" is sometimes used, but it's not very common.
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Generally, your English is already good! Your grammar has small errors, but it seems you have a good grasp on it. I would be careful with the content and composition of your writing. You communicate the general idea well, but some conjunctions or phrases don't match with the tone of the content.
Jan. 15, 2022
Thanks!
Jan. 15, 2022
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.
Why I can't use have?
Jan. 15, 2022
It's not wrong grammatically. You could keep it there, and but using "have finished" adds a certain nuance about when you finished reading or about an expectation that you should be finished, and in context to the whole sentence, it doesn't seem needed. I haven't formally studied English, so sorry if I can't explain it better!
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Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I got another book to read it this week.
Today, I
Today, I have finished reading 'The Porn Pandemic', and I also got another book to read just some stylistic feedback |
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Though English is my second language and I've been learning it for a few years by myself, I enjoy reading books in English.
Though English is my second language I would be careful of using multiple clauses. You have 3 clauses here, which are "Though English is my second language" "I've been studying it for a few years by myself" and "I enjoy reading books in English" The last two clauses don't really work with "though" in the beginning of the sentence.
Just some stylistic feedback |
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The book is about English grammar and writing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope that it helps me to improve my English writing and grammar.
I hope that it helps me Generally, it's already a good sentence. But I would combine the previous sentence to give the writing more complexity to make "The book is about English grammar and writing, and I hope that it would help me improve. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, I'm trying very hard because I'm learning the language by myself.
I want to achieve my dream of becoming a writer, but to be honest, "to be honest" doesn't make sense with "I'm trying very hard" since it makes it sound like you trying hard is a bad thing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The only source that I find people to help me to improve my writing is this platform because I can't afford to join courses or have a tutor.
The only source This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping us.
So, thanks to everyone in this beneficial platform for helping Up until this point, you've mentioned only yourself, so keep your writing consistent by using me instead of us.
So thanks to everyone |
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This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books related to them.
This year, I decided to improve my writ The phrase "written English" is sometimes used, but it's not very common.
This year, I decided to improve my written English and vocabulary by reading books Good work. |
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